Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Chapter Seven, Part 1"It was their world long before our existence...
14 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
What a joyful surprise to find out that Bongo is a black panther. Perfect!
And I am so glad Twilight showed up, as well. I had an idea he was not out of the picture yet. :-)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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What a joyful surprise to find out that Bongo is a black panther. Perfect!
And I am so glad Twilight showed up, as well. I had an idea he was not out of the picture yet. :-)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Told you... ;) :) And I'll leave it up to the reader to decide panther or just the size of one... ;) :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I think that Memphis sounds like a little bit of a problem. I hope things work out good for Maggie. How did Maggie's cat and owl get there before she arrived? Did I miss the punch line about the animals?
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I think that Memphis sounds like a little bit of a problem. I hope things work out good for Maggie. How did Maggie's cat and owl get there before she arrived? Did I miss the punch line about the animals?
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Questions, questions.... hmmmm... :) :) :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Ah, the mystery intensifies withe the arrival of the owl and Bongo. Things should start popping now that all the characters are getting into place. Intrigue to the max.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Ah, the mystery intensifies withe the arrival of the owl and Bongo. Things should start popping now that all the characters are getting into place. Intrigue to the max.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Hooray for intrigue...!! ;) :)
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You do the intrigue part well.
Comment from susand3022
This was awesome! But I'm sure you know that! I read it two days ago... along with all of my other books... lol I just didn't review them... I should have, I missed the $! LOL I can't wait until Maggie gets into the house and meets the people!!! :) This is looking to be so much fun!!! Hahahahahaha!!! Can't wait any longer!!! Can't I get a preview?? You've got my e-mail!!! :)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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This was awesome! But I'm sure you know that! I read it two days ago... along with all of my other books... lol I just didn't review them... I should have, I missed the $! LOL I can't wait until Maggie gets into the house and meets the people!!! :) This is looking to be so much fun!!! Hahahahahaha!!! Can't wait any longer!!! Can't I get a preview?? You've got my e-mail!!! :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
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Hooray, so glad you enjoyed!! Need to finish up the next part just as soon as life slows down a bit....there's a lot to keep active in my head with so many characters in this one and I gotta be focused rather than distracted....perhaps Wed/Thurs... :) ;) We'll see... :) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
I loved it! Thank you Yvette for writing this. I was desperate to read more and you tease me with a bit of honey. :) I read it on my phone and I just finished it again on my computer. :) This is outstanding!!!! Beautiful write. Thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I loved it! Thank you Yvette for writing this. I was desperate to read more and you tease me with a bit of honey. :) I read it on my phone and I just finished it again on my computer. :) This is outstanding!!!! Beautiful write. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Wow, Jose!! ;) Thank you so very much for those stars and especially for your enthusiasm with this one!! ;) :) As always, thank you so very much for following Maggie's saga -- at least now they'll all be in the same place! ;) ;) LOL! ;) Take care, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from doggymad1
Hi Yvette. I have come late to this one. It would be difficult to catch to forgive me if I only follow your other writings.
I like your style and the use of local dialect to enhance the read. Lovely to see you list the characters with a description of their roles.
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Hi Yvette. I have come late to this one. It would be difficult to catch to forgive me if I only follow your other writings.
I like your style and the use of local dialect to enhance the read. Lovely to see you list the characters with a description of their roles.
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Perfectly understood, Freda! ;) Just glad to have you out there, ma'am -- take good care of you and enjoy the week! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Yvette. I belong to a local writer's group and when someone has a chapt. each month they also supply a synopsis. I think it would help me keep up with books as sections are ready. I just wonder if you do that? I am old and keeping up is a chore for my exercised brain, especially if there are many days between sections. I had to laugh out loud at the word "soon" in the story. Every time I ask my wife when something is going to happen, that is her exact answer. The word is a variable to her. It never means the same thing to her. Z
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Hi Yvette. I belong to a local writer's group and when someone has a chapt. each month they also supply a synopsis. I think it would help me keep up with books as sections are ready. I just wonder if you do that? I am old and keeping up is a chore for my exercised brain, especially if there are many days between sections. I had to laugh out loud at the word "soon" in the story. Every time I ask my wife when something is going to happen, that is her exact answer. The word is a variable to her. It never means the same thing to her. Z
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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yeah -- thought about that, but there is SO VERY MUCH about each of the characters and other smaller happenings that a summary would be nearly impossible without going back and re-explaining things that have been revealed (and others implied/read between the lines) through interactions and descriptions and other such instances. I know that probably makes no sense to you, but I truly don't know how to summarize without leaving out A LOT that is slowly being revealed... :) :) Sorry. I am glad that you found a smile in there.... and thank you sincerely for your review, Z!! ;) ;) Truly means a lot! ;) ;) Yvette
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter the arrival holds a great surprise for Addy when the missing cathe was waiting for them at the destination and after much speculation of the residentsidi.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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A very well-written chapter the arrival holds a great surprise for Addy when the missing cathe was waiting for them at the destination and after much speculation of the residentsidi.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review on Maggie and the gang, Sandra -- finally have everyone in the same place. :) ;) Yvette
Comment from JudyE
I am more and more glad I went back to the beginning but I'm enjoying it now.
the heat rolling off the exercised Kato lingering there - do you mean 'excited'Kato'?
but the hairs on the back of the Leprechaun's neck - should 'Leprechaun' be upper- or lower-case? I'm not sure. I guess as long as it's consistent throughout the story, it's not a big deal either way.
Kato who had gone from slightly on edge to extremely exercised - again, should it be 'excited'?
"Kato! Kato look at me!" She demanded looking up at the towering young male. - commas after the second 'Kato' and after 'demanded'
And the closer the black cat came to the house, Kato lost a little bit more of his person. - I might have written this as 'And the closer the black cat came to the house, the more Kato lost of his person.'
"Th' cat's 'ers, too?" Peadar tried to keep his nails from extending with his growing irritation with the whole situation. "By Artio*!" is the star at the end of 'Artio' there for a reason?
Shortly, however, Lyca's muscles return to normal. - should be 'returned'
"Welcome to the The Refuge, Marguerite Atkinson," - delete 'the' or 'The'
Great stuff
Best wishes
Judy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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I am more and more glad I went back to the beginning but I'm enjoying it now.
the heat rolling off the exercised Kato lingering there - do you mean 'excited'Kato'?
but the hairs on the back of the Leprechaun's neck - should 'Leprechaun' be upper- or lower-case? I'm not sure. I guess as long as it's consistent throughout the story, it's not a big deal either way.
Kato who had gone from slightly on edge to extremely exercised - again, should it be 'excited'?
"Kato! Kato look at me!" She demanded looking up at the towering young male. - commas after the second 'Kato' and after 'demanded'
And the closer the black cat came to the house, Kato lost a little bit more of his person. - I might have written this as 'And the closer the black cat came to the house, the more Kato lost of his person.'
"Th' cat's 'ers, too?" Peadar tried to keep his nails from extending with his growing irritation with the whole situation. "By Artio*!" is the star at the end of 'Artio' there for a reason?
Shortly, however, Lyca's muscles return to normal. - should be 'returned'
"Welcome to the The Refuge, Marguerite Atkinson," - delete 'the' or 'The'
Great stuff
Best wishes
Judy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Good morning, Lady Judy, and thank you so very much for the 'catches' -- ever so appreciated!! ;) ;) Thanx for joining in the story and take care this week! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
Now how did I know that Bongo would precede them? Maybe he was Maggie's consignment after, with the magical quality that all black cats have. Kato was obviously unnerved and restless, and the big grey owl made an appearance as a sign of Maggie's coming, well the new protectress is here, does she know what to do? Well done Yvette, good episode, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Now how did I know that Bongo would precede them? Maybe he was Maggie's consignment after, with the magical quality that all black cats have. Kato was obviously unnerved and restless, and the big grey owl made an appearance as a sign of Maggie's coming, well the new protectress is here, does she know what to do? Well done Yvette, good episode, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Let's just say that Maggie has no clue what's she getting into (other than a really nice house for her and Addy!) -- LOL! ;) ;) Gonna be interesting! ;) Thanx for hanging in there with Maggie! ;) Yvette
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Well done
