Die in Shame or Live with Grace
Our Choice16 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The more attention we pay to what we want to say the better our choice of words. There is an art to choosing uplifting rather than downgrading conversation. Encouragement is welcomed by everyone. Once you take that path you will find many walking beside you.
Your poem is a collection of positive ways to begin, if not already started. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
  |
The more attention we pay to what we want to say the better our choice of words. There is an art to choosing uplifting rather than downgrading conversation. Encouragement is welcomed by everyone. Once you take that path you will find many walking beside you.
Your poem is a collection of positive ways to begin, if not already started. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
-
Thank you very much for this wonderful and understanding review, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Die in Shame or Live with Grace", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. To me echoes of "Do unto others", echo through this talented poet's lines. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
|
"Die in Shame or Live with Grace", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. To me echoes of "Do unto others", echo through this talented poet's lines. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
-
Thank you very much your review is very inspiring****kahpot
Comment from Patty Palmer
Words certainly can cause problems! Your poem says what words can cause.
the rhyme and rhythm is good. I don't see anything that looks like it could need any changes. Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
|
Words certainly can cause problems! Your poem says what words can cause.
the rhyme and rhythm is good. I don't see anything that looks like it could need any changes. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
-
Thank you very much, yes they can cause problems****kahpot
-
You're welcome
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, strong, creative
and thought provoking. I really found this poem filled with excellent
advice. Words make a difference. The title of this poems says
volumes and attracted me to this poem. Thank you for the inspiring
and thought provoking words that are so much needed.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
|
Excellent Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, strong, creative
and thought provoking. I really found this poem filled with excellent
advice. Words make a difference. The title of this poems says
volumes and attracted me to this poem. Thank you for the inspiring
and thought provoking words that are so much needed.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for this inspirational review****kahpot
Comment from BeasPeas
This is an excellent poem, written and expressed very well and I wish you much luck in the contest. Your poem has a positive theme of timelessness and accomplishment, education and civility. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
|
This is an excellent poem, written and expressed very well and I wish you much luck in the contest. Your poem has a positive theme of timelessness and accomplishment, education and civility. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
-
Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about how to live with grace instead of dying in shame. The choice is ours to make, we can either learn to love each other and live gracefully or choose to hate and die in shame.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
|
A very well-written poem about how to live with grace instead of dying in shame. The choice is ours to make, we can either learn to love each other and live gracefully or choose to hate and die in shame.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
-
Thank you very much*****ahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes it does seem that today more words are said to divide than to unite.
If it were the opposite than we would have a world of peace and acceptance we all dream of. Words do have power and we need to
use them carefully and encouragingly.
I like the format of couplets and quatrains. It seems to emphasize the point being made.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
|
Yes it does seem that today more words are said to divide than to unite.
If it were the opposite than we would have a world of peace and acceptance we all dream of. Words do have power and we need to
use them carefully and encouragingly.
I like the format of couplets and quatrains. It seems to emphasize the point being made.
Good luck and keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for this wonderful review****kahpot
-
My pleasure, kahpot
Joan
Comment from Gail Denham
I like the line "words of encouragement have now become rare" - I truly hope each one of us can and will change this. Especially for our young people. I confess I feel as if I didn't encourage our four boys as much as I should have.
Good poem - last line the word "we're" - misplaced mark.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
|
I like the line "words of encouragement have now become rare" - I truly hope each one of us can and will change this. Especially for our young people. I confess I feel as if I didn't encourage our four boys as much as I should have.
Good poem - last line the word "we're" - misplaced mark.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
-
Thank you very much for this excellent review****kahpot
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match you captured my attention from the first line to the last
our words are so on point
Yes words are a powerful tool
They can make your break you
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
|
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match you captured my attention from the first line to the last
our words are so on point
Yes words are a powerful tool
They can make your break you
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
-
Thank you for this wonderful review, yes words are very powerful****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your excellent, moving poem makes great use of specific details to convey its theme on the almost inestimable power of words. The list of things that can not be accomplished through words is short compared to that OTHER
list!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
|
Your excellent, moving poem makes great use of specific details to convey its theme on the almost inestimable power of words. The list of things that can not be accomplished through words is short compared to that OTHER
list!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
-
Thank so very much, yes they powerful****kahpot
