Scene at a Hypnotist Act Part 1
Pons and Ned meet at a hypnotist act.17 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Funny stuff. The scene at the hypnotist's performance certainly gives Ned a lot of material. Love the suggestion about the opposing smells. Ned is supposed to smell good and Pons, terrible. That would allow for some great reaction. Ned's mastery of pronunciation comes through again. judi
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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Funny stuff. The scene at the hypnotist's performance certainly gives Ned a lot of material. Love the suggestion about the opposing smells. Ned is supposed to smell good and Pons, terrible. That would allow for some great reaction. Ned's mastery of pronunciation comes through again. judi
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2019
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I don?t know where he gets this stuff.
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I've seen in television shows hypnotists have people doing strange things, but nothing like the smell bit. judi
Comment from Earl Corp
I enjoy watching hypnotists at work, I've seen a couple of hypnotism shows and they're hilarious. This has a lot of potential, i can't wait to read the next one.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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I enjoy watching hypnotists at work, I've seen a couple of hypnotism shows and they're hilarious. This has a lot of potential, i can't wait to read the next one.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Earl.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Bill, I can always count on you to make me giggle... lol Mr. Hypno sure does have a sense of humor! I've never seen one of these types of shows, in reality, I imagine it would be something just like this though. Highly entertaining... off to the next one! :)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Hi Bill, I can always count on you to make me giggle... lol Mr. Hypno sure does have a sense of humor! I've never seen one of these types of shows, in reality, I imagine it would be something just like this though. Highly entertaining... off to the next one! :)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Susan, for the great review.
Comment from J W Warner
Clever scene. I enjoyed it. You struck the right balance between dialogue which is not rendered in "proper English" but without it being distracting or unreadable.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Clever scene. I enjoyed it. You struck the right balance between dialogue which is not rendered in "proper English" but without it being distracting or unreadable.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2019
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Thanks, JW
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, good heavens!! :) This has got to be a hypnotists worst nightmare -- Ned under the power of suggestion!! ;) ;) Loved it so far, Sir Bill, but once again, you've left us out here hanging on....and we're not asleep!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Oh, good heavens!! :) This has got to be a hypnotists worst nightmare -- Ned under the power of suggestion!! ;) ;) Loved it so far, Sir Bill, but once again, you've left us out here hanging on....and we're not asleep!! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Sorry. Working on it.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
There are so many things you could do with a story like this. I think I's get a kick out of seeing Ned turn the tables on Mister Hypno. Who knows, you may already have that in mind. Looking forward to the rest of the story!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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There are so many things you could do with a story like this. I think I's get a kick out of seeing Ned turn the tables on Mister Hypno. Who knows, you may already have that in mind. Looking forward to the rest of the story!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Brenda. I'll see if I can make that happen.
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You're welcome, Bill. :)
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is very funny, Bill. It's like a the gal who told about her dog who was sprayed by a skunk welcoming them home. The dog happy to see them, jumping all over them, while they were trying to keep him away. This was a good idea. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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This is very funny, Bill. It's like a the gal who told about her dog who was sprayed by a skunk welcoming them home. The dog happy to see them, jumping all over them, while they were trying to keep him away. This was a good idea. Nancy:)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Nancy.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, Bill.
-This is a very good
scene at the hypnotist show.
-I like how Ned begins
quacking and howling
before the show even begins-
maybe he doesn't need
Mister Hypno, or then again...
-Of course, they are
selected as two of the volunteers.
-You come up with a
pretty good scenario as
they are hypnotized and
end up going around the
stage, with opposite reactions
to each other.
-I look forward to the
next episode!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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-Good artwork, Bill.
-This is a very good
scene at the hypnotist show.
-I like how Ned begins
quacking and howling
before the show even begins-
maybe he doesn't need
Mister Hypno, or then again...
-Of course, they are
selected as two of the volunteers.
-You come up with a
pretty good scenario as
they are hypnotized and
end up going around the
stage, with opposite reactions
to each other.
-I look forward to the
next episode!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Pam, for the upbeat review. Bill
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You are quite welcome and deserving, Bill. You do a great job with these characters!
Comment from Sylvia Page
This is a hilarious skit, Bill. What if they both wake up chasing each other? Won't that be a scream? Looking forward to your continued writing...
Best wishes
Sylvia
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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This is a hilarious skit, Bill. What if they both wake up chasing each other? Won't that be a scream? Looking forward to your continued writing...
Best wishes
Sylvia
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Sylvia.
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Welcome
Comment from nomi338
Thank you Bill, you have given my required laugh of the day. I can easily imagine the two cousins, one trying to get near to the other and the other trying his best to get away. Giving the nature of the relationship of the two cousins and Ned personality, it sounds like a complete hoot. I actually laughed out loud.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you Bill, you have given my required laugh of the day. I can easily imagine the two cousins, one trying to get near to the other and the other trying his best to get away. Giving the nature of the relationship of the two cousins and Ned personality, it sounds like a complete hoot. I actually laughed out loud.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thanks, nomi. I have some more coming.
