Fire & Ice
Loves extreme emotions...28 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
I have just chanced upon your poem... no wonder it won the contest! The proximity of positive and negative emotions are put together here in a very skilful manner, incorporating the required contest words effortlessly.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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I have just chanced upon your poem... no wonder it won the contest! The proximity of positive and negative emotions are put together here in a very skilful manner, incorporating the required contest words effortlessly.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2019
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Thank you Lisa! I was pretty shocked I won! There were so many awesome submissions and mine was so short compared! I am humbled to say the least! Thanks for enjoying and commenting!
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Well deserved. xx
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xoxo
Comment from LyndaS
Girl, sorry it took so long for me to get to this. WOW!! Congrats on the win but I can see why!!! You are just a passionate little kitten! LOL! This is so cool. Your free verse rocks and screams of familiar truth. Your art was very powerful. Loved the formatting. Clearly a winner. AWESOME!!! Extremely well done. Can't say enough about how much I loved this. xx oo Lynda
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Girl, sorry it took so long for me to get to this. WOW!! Congrats on the win but I can see why!!! You are just a passionate little kitten! LOL! This is so cool. Your free verse rocks and screams of familiar truth. Your art was very powerful. Loved the formatting. Clearly a winner. AWESOME!!! Extremely well done. Can't say enough about how much I loved this. xx oo Lynda
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Oh thank, you Linda, so much! This is my first 1st place win!!! I can?t believe it but so thankful! So glad that you liked it!
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Well deserved, Sista!!!
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xoxoxoxo!!!!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your ultra-concise poem skillfully uses the four required words to convey
how powerful emotions can be and how one strong emotion can morph
into another, sometimes not for the better.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Your ultra-concise poem skillfully uses the four required words to convey
how powerful emotions can be and how one strong emotion can morph
into another, sometimes not for the better.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for checking it out! This is my first ?Prompt? entry so I?m so thrilled by the win! I really appreciate that you took time to comment!
Comment from June Sargent
This is a great piece using all the required words! Perfect artwork to highlight the well arranged words to paint a painful picture of betrayal. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This is a great piece using all the required words! Perfect artwork to highlight the well arranged words to paint a painful picture of betrayal. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you June! Prompts can be quite challenging and this is my first try! I appreciate your time and wonderful comment!
Comment from bob cullen
That is a sensational write. You have used the required words in a stunning fashion. To complete the poem so briefly adds to the work's merit. I also loved the message the poem sends. It transcends the story of love completely.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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That is a sensational write. You have used the required words in a stunning fashion. To complete the poem so briefly adds to the work's merit. I also loved the message the poem sends. It transcends the story of love completely.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much, Bob! This is my first attempt at writing from a ?prompt?! I love free verse because it allows me to think outside the poetry box! I appreciate immensely that you enjoyed! :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
How indeed! The passion of love that overtakes one is so all encompassing as to leave the mind sterile and later when reasonableness returns to their life the truth may rear its ugly head in some cases where love is blind. The greater the passion the deeper the betrayal and the hurt turns to hate in the twinkling of an eye.
Wonderful picture that compliments your words. Great poem, if I had them I would give you 6 stars.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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How indeed! The passion of love that overtakes one is so all encompassing as to leave the mind sterile and later when reasonableness returns to their life the truth may rear its ugly head in some cases where love is blind. The greater the passion the deeper the betrayal and the hurt turns to hate in the twinkling of an eye.
Wonderful picture that compliments your words. Great poem, if I had them I would give you 6 stars.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate the virtual 6 and your awesome comment! I wish they would give us more 6?s to share! I am out of review nominations and would have given to you if I had! Your review is spot on! xoxo
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I am pleased by your reply.
Comment from tfawcus
This is the chilling reality of cooling ardour! Strong emotions like love pivot between extremes. Fire and ice make good metaphors for it. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This is the chilling reality of cooling ardour! Strong emotions like love pivot between extremes. Fire and ice make good metaphors for it. Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your time and comment! This is the first time I?ve tried a contest like this! So happy you enjoyed!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I believe as you've stated so eloquently, that the fire can be ignited by trust, passion, and love. That same fire can be diffused and turned to ice by mistrust, lies, and betrayal. I enjoyed reading this passionate and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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I believe as you've stated so eloquently, that the fire can be ignited by trust, passion, and love. That same fire can be diffused and turned to ice by mistrust, lies, and betrayal. I enjoyed reading this passionate and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your time and comment! This is my first try at this type of contest! Glad you enjoyed!
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Oh wow. Amazing usage of the words. Could read it over and over again, a million times without getting bored. Hope you win the contest. You would deserve to win. Good luck, and good job.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Oh wow. Amazing usage of the words. Could read it over and over again, a million times without getting bored. Hope you win the contest. You would deserve to win. Good luck, and good job.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Awesome! Thank you so much! It thrills me to no end that you find it drawing you back to read again! So grateful for you kind review!
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You are welcome. Good luck in the contest, (again).
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:) xoxoxo
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I actually won 1st place with this! Woo hoo! :)
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Good job for winning the contest again.
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Xoxo
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Xoxoxo. Good job, (again).
P.S. I know I said that before, but you deserve to hear it again and again.
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Awww...Tanvi, I?m going to have to find you again when my reviewer nominations are replenished because God knows how much I wish I had one for you :) xoxoxo
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May I ask how old you are? I read your haiku about your brother and it sounds like you are younger.
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I am 10 years old. So you are correct.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent use of the required words. A great description of how so many relationships start in fire and end in numbing cold. Powerful message that flows well and read equally well both silently and out loud. Hugh
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Excellent use of the required words. A great description of how so many relationships start in fire and end in numbing cold. Powerful message that flows well and read equally well both silently and out loud. Hugh
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much! It is my first attempt at a contest like this! I greatly appreciate your time and comment!
