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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A neat and unique Haiku about life's unusual spiralling and I enjoyed this analogy between outer space, nature and man, all with their own individual spiral of life, a clever write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments.
    It's an Interesting subject to look into. Blessings to you!
Comment from Lance Loria
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You explained Haiku well, but isn't this poem about human nature? I enjoyed your poetry but wondering if it followed the writing prompt. Good luck on second or third place finish (I already submitted my "winning" entry). LoL

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
    I tried to include Human and Physical activity by Identifying the common elements of Physical structuring of both Matter and Beings.
    A Fibonacci sequence of creation reference only. Thanks for the review and compliments.