Heart n Hope
True18 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
This is just beautiful kahpot. So simple and yet so much is said that makes me smile, so many thanks to you for that.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This is just beautiful kahpot. So simple and yet so much is said that makes me smile, so many thanks to you for that.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you, I am glad to (see) you smile, ****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
That's how we should always feel. Where there is life, there is hope. Never give up. Our hearts are stronger than we realize. Lovely sentiments summed up in one line.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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That's how we should always feel. Where there is life, there is hope. Never give up. Our hearts are stronger than we realize. Lovely sentiments summed up in one line.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you, yes in and through life there is always hope****kahpot
Comment from Michele Harber
What a lovely sentiment: as long as there's life, there's hope. It's a valid and important point, and makes this a meaningful entry in the One Line Poem contest. Good luck in the judging.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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What a lovely sentiment: as long as there's life, there's hope. It's a valid and important point, and makes this a meaningful entry in the One Line Poem contest. Good luck in the judging.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your very understanding comments****kahpot
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You?re very welcome.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
You have written an excellent one line poem. I'm not sure you could have made any improvements even if you had three more lines in a stanza. Everything you wanted to say was said in one sentence. Very Good.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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You have written an excellent one line poem. I'm not sure you could have made any improvements even if you had three more lines in a stanza. Everything you wanted to say was said in one sentence. Very Good.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you, it is a challenge to put feelings in so few words****kahpot
Comment from Cybertron1986
The simplicity of this piece projects a powerfully inspirational feel. I like the use of a heart that is fueled by hope. I am moved by the thought of hope strengthening through the implication of life, love, and hope. Beautiful voice and philosophy that everyone can appreciate and remember. Well deserving six.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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The simplicity of this piece projects a powerfully inspirational feel. I like the use of a heart that is fueled by hope. I am moved by the thought of hope strengthening through the implication of life, love, and hope. Beautiful voice and philosophy that everyone can appreciate and remember. Well deserving six.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Wow! Many thanks, recent times made me think of what heart and hope is really about****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Hello, Kahpot. Good to see you! Great one-liner which shows us the enduring spirit of the human heart that will keep hoping as long as there is life. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hello, Kahpot. Good to see you! Great one-liner which shows us the enduring spirit of the human heart that will keep hoping as long as there is life. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you, and yes times make us think and hope****kahpot
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely thought for a one-liner, kahpot!! As we age, our hope for more than what we are now grows larger... :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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What a lovely thought for a one-liner, kahpot!! As we age, our hope for more than what we are now grows larger... :) ;) Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you, and yes we must hope we can continue to grow****kahpot
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and very lovely imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This is a very well written one line poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good words and very lovely imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your very encouraging review, many thanks****kahpot
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you are so welcome!
