Heart n Hope
True18 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Congratulations on your third place finish with this one-line bit of philosophical poetry. It is true that as long as you are alive there
is always hope.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Congratulations on your third place finish with this one-line bit of philosophical poetry. It is true that as long as you are alive there
is always hope.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you f these wonderful comments and your congratulations, very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are most kindly welcome, kahpot
Joan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a wonderfully heartfelt, and hopeful poem. I, too, love the artwork by jgrace. This is such a positive and inspirational piece, and all in one line, no less. I saw that you won a prize and I had to read it for myself. I'm sorry I missed it before, but as you know, I have been offline for a while. Great. I love the title, and the line above it says it so well, "True." Thank you for putting your talented grace in my heart on this early Saturday morning. Have a good weekend.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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This is a wonderfully heartfelt, and hopeful poem. I, too, love the artwork by jgrace. This is such a positive and inspirational piece, and all in one line, no less. I saw that you won a prize and I had to read it for myself. I'm sorry I missed it before, but as you know, I have been offline for a while. Great. I love the title, and the line above it says it so well, "True." Thank you for putting your talented grace in my heart on this early Saturday morning. Have a good weekend.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you truly for your wonderful comments and review, I had all but forgotten about this one as I posted it some months ago, I am glad you liked and related to it, very much appreciated, and I hope all is OK and welcome back****kahpot
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It is nice to have my review appreciated, as you have done. It resonated with me, as I needed the inspirational piece to read.
I am still grieving my loss of Emma but, it feels good to be back on Fan Story. Thank you for welcoming me back.
Jesse
Comment from Joan E.
Your One-Line poem reinforces what I try to remember: I have a variety of autoimmune diseases, but none of them is life-threating; so, I still have hope! Congratulations on having your entry well-received in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your One-Line poem reinforces what I try to remember: I have a variety of autoimmune diseases, but none of them is life-threating; so, I still have hope! Congratulations on having your entry well-received in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for your lovely comments and congratulations, I wish you well and all the best****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, this is a poem that makes the reader say ahh. Great sensory appeal. As long as there is hope, there is a reason to get up and face the day. Well-chosen artwork choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hello Kahpot, this is a poem that makes the reader say ahh. Great sensory appeal. As long as there is hope, there is a reason to get up and face the day. Well-chosen artwork choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Wow! thank you very much, highly appreciated, I see you have copped three in a row of mine, it made me smile- 6-5-4 stars in a row, no complaints here, just made me smile, many thanks my friend****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is excellent. It's a great entry in the One Line Poem contest and should do very well in the voting booth. Contests are difficult to win on FanStory. There are so many talented members.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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This is excellent. It's a great entry in the One Line Poem contest and should do very well in the voting booth. Contests are difficult to win on FanStory. There are so many talented members.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you and yes I agree, still it is all a learning curve, many thanks for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written one-line poem about hope that stays alive and grow for as long as we breathe and have life in our bodies to keep hope high on our agenda.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A very well-written one-line poem about hope that stays alive and grow for as long as we breathe and have life in our bodies to keep hope high on our agenda.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your excellent comments
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
While my heart still pumps, my hope still grows.
Excellent entry to one line poem contest. And so true. I have heard people say when hope is gone, there is nothing to live for
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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While my heart still pumps, my hope still grows.
Excellent entry to one line poem contest. And so true. I have heard people say when hope is gone, there is nothing to live for
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes hope is definitely needed
Comment from Mark D. R.
Delightful one liner you created.
Taking nothing away from your verse, please consider increasing the font size and/or bolding your text. IMHO ... it makes for a better FanStory presentation for readers.
I too have used FanArt's jgrace for some of my posts. Great choice for your contest entry posting.
Mark
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Delightful one liner you created.
Taking nothing away from your verse, please consider increasing the font size and/or bolding your text. IMHO ... it makes for a better FanStory presentation for readers.
I too have used FanArt's jgrace for some of my posts. Great choice for your contest entry posting.
Mark
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, I will look at your suggestions
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, kahpot.
-Good to see you on FS.
-You have a good one line poem.
-Good description with
the two sections-the
heart pumping, and
hope growing.
-It is a positive message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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-Nice image, kahpot.
-Good to see you on FS.
-You have a good one line poem.
-Good description with
the two sections-the
heart pumping, and
hope growing.
-It is a positive message, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear KAHPOT,
I enjoyed your beautiful picture and positive one line poem. The strength of your presentation add so much to the feeling and conviction of your poem. My best, Deborah
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Dear KAHPOT,
I enjoyed your beautiful picture and positive one line poem. The strength of your presentation add so much to the feeling and conviction of your poem. My best, Deborah
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much, I like the feed back that poem and artwork connect, many thanks****kahpot
