Berry Disgusted
Sharing doesn't apply to rodents36 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Too cute! The little chipmunk enjoying berries with no thought to where he was sitting, and the thought that it might be time to move from the county. Humor by exaggeration is always fun. Thanks for such a darling poem.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Too cute! The little chipmunk enjoying berries with no thought to where he was sitting, and the thought that it might be time to move from the county. Humor by exaggeration is always fun. Thanks for such a darling poem.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2022
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Hey, CrystieCookie999! I took a three-year hiatus, and am now in the process of trying to clear out my Review Received inbox!
Thanks for this one of yours. I appreciated your warm words very much.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
This poem is another of your great ones... a collection! I loved your story, rhyme and pace! If I had 6 stars you would be awarded 6 not 5 and this one is outstanding!
My best in winning...Deborah.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Dear Author,
This poem is another of your great ones... a collection! I loved your story, rhyme and pace! If I had 6 stars you would be awarded 6 not 5 and this one is outstanding!
My best in winning...Deborah.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I'm happy for the five and the terrific review. Thanks for both. xo
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My pleasure!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi it is such a beautiful write ,I love it. But still I am sad o say that it was not very good to hate that little creature. Just st think of of it. Before you bought the place...or life no before t was wild and it was the place for that little creature to supply himself with food...yea? Now you are there, how could he forget this. Just let him share the natures supply with you.you will learn to like him.
Benny
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Hi it is such a beautiful write ,I love it. But still I am sad o say that it was not very good to hate that little creature. Just st think of of it. Before you bought the place...or life no before t was wild and it was the place for that little creature to supply himself with food...yea? Now you are there, how could he forget this. Just let him share the natures supply with you.you will learn to like him.
Benny
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Oh, I did better than that, Benny; I gave him free reign of those berries. I never wanted to touch them again! He gets to eat every last one!
Thanks for the fun review! xo
Comment from Bichon
Haha, a fun poem. I don't think we get chipmunks here and I haven't had many encounters with rodents, but I wouldn't like to share food with them, I don't blame you!!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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Haha, a fun poem. I don't think we get chipmunks here and I haven't had many encounters with rodents, but I wouldn't like to share food with them, I don't blame you!!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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I knew you'd understand, Bichon! THANK YOU! xo
Comment from Earl Corp
That is kind of harsh, chipmunks don't eat Much and you're going to wash the berries any way. Good luck in the contest. Besides that chipmunk s are infinitely cleaner than other rodents.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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That is kind of harsh, chipmunks don't eat Much and you're going to wash the berries any way. Good luck in the contest. Besides that chipmunk s are infinitely cleaner than other rodents.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2019
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That's like telling me that dirt is a lot cleaner than sludge. And I don't want to eat anything where a rodent's potty parts have been; I couldn't possibly clean it well enough.
Comment from Heather Knight
Aww! But chipmunks are cute!
I love your poem and your title is great. You made me smile (as usual).
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Aww! But chipmunks are cute!
I love your poem and your title is great. You made me smile (as usual).
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Now, Maria, there is nothing cute about a rodent. Even one with a fancy racing stripe across his back. But I still like you anyway. And I REALLY like your review. Thank you. xo
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:)
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Haha you fussy thing, Rachel.
Your sweet berries were born to be shared. Your delicious bounty attracts all creatures of good taste. Don't walk away, tis only flattery, join them in a orgy of wanton berry worship. You will be liberated and you will embrace your new furry friends and all of nature will celebrate.
Tomorrow, who knows, maybe you will make friends with the rats who eat your waste. :)
Isn't nature wonderful?
Best
John xo
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Haha you fussy thing, Rachel.
Your sweet berries were born to be shared. Your delicious bounty attracts all creatures of good taste. Don't walk away, tis only flattery, join them in a orgy of wanton berry worship. You will be liberated and you will embrace your new furry friends and all of nature will celebrate.
Tomorrow, who knows, maybe you will make friends with the rats who eat your waste. :)
Isn't nature wonderful?
Best
John xo
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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You make it all sound SO very appealing, John. No wonder I find you so irresistible. xo
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Hahaha anytime sweetheart.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Berry Disgusted", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's piece, put a huge grin on my face! To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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"Berry Disgusted", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's piece, put a huge grin on my face! To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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When a five comes with such warm and encouraging words, it IS a six as far as I'm concerned. Thank you for this lovely review. xo
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Funny and well put together poem. Good, clear and understandable post. I am a little disappointed you allowed
the thieving little rodent to win. Good work.
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Funny and well put together poem. Good, clear and understandable post. I am a little disappointed you allowed
the thieving little rodent to win. Good work.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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HAHAHAH. Well, I can go to the store for strawberries, so I have an advantage that way. Every now and then, I'm that kind of gracious.
Delightful review. Thank you, Willie. xo
Comment from Karen Luciana
Hello,
I laughed after reading your poem, because I feel exactly as you do. You wrote in such a way that I could actually see that little creature eating your lovely strawberries. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Hello,
I laughed after reading your poem, because I feel exactly as you do. You wrote in such a way that I could actually see that little creature eating your lovely strawberries. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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It was an ugly moment for me, Karen. Ugly, ugly, ugly.
Thank you for the understand review!! xo
