Gross, Use a Shoe
Lowku Poem contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from john mallahan
I know--right? Sometimes find myself squishen em, with the bare hands, when you least expect. Other thing is, we might be eaten em some day--so better get used to the french fry...
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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I know--right? Sometimes find myself squishen em, with the bare hands, when you least expect. Other thing is, we might be eaten em some day--so better get used to the french fry...
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2019
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Haha. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, John. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Splattered bug guts by hand. That qualifies as gross and nasty. Good work. No edits or adjustments necessary from me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Splattered bug guts by hand. That qualifies as gross and nasty. Good work. No edits or adjustments necessary from me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lance. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What?! That grosses you out?! I think she's a warrior princess. At least she's not one of those sissy-women who screams and carries on and needs YOU to kill whatever bug she wants killed. Plus, without her talents, you would not have been inspired to write this Lowku and enter this fun contest! Good luck to you...thanks to her! xo
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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What?! That grosses you out?! I think she's a warrior princess. At least she's not one of those sissy-women who screams and carries on and needs YOU to kill whatever bug she wants killed. Plus, without her talents, you would not have been inspired to write this Lowku and enter this fun contest! Good luck to you...thanks to her! xo
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Lol, that's so true. Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Rachelle. Have a beautiful day.
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You are so very welcome!! Now go hug your wife (just tell her to wash her hands first...) xo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Problem is using bare hands for killing bugs, it is unbearable, you have rightly suggested to your highly experienced wife to use shoes instead; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Problem is using bare hands for killing bugs, it is unbearable, you have rightly suggested to your highly experienced wife to use shoes instead; well said, well done. Write-Inspire-Change --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Dr. Al.
Comment from LisaMay
What a big game hunter and killer your tender wife must be! Is the bug's blood yours or hers? Such a warrior! Good topic to have us feeling somewhat revulsed. Yecch. Therefore your poem is a success in fitting the Lowku brief.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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What a big game hunter and killer your tender wife must be! Is the bug's blood yours or hers? Such a warrior! Good topic to have us feeling somewhat revulsed. Yecch. Therefore your poem is a success in fitting the Lowku brief.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Haha. Thank you for the fantastic review and generous stars, Lisa. I'm glad you were disgusted. Lol. Have a great day.
