Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Suspect the custodian....always suspect the custodian...LOL! LOL! I just had to say that because you know who always used that joke in conversations? Our custodian!! Gosh, I miss that man's humor!! :) ;) This was a very sad offering, Debra (LOL!) and it is VERY obvious that you have been working around children too long!! :O :) :O :P :P ..... you do know that I'm joking, Beautiful Lady!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

LOL! Thanks so much for your fun feedback, Yvette :) My childish muse took over today... ;)
Best wishes to you as always, Debra x

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Debra,

Hmmmm... Makes you wonder what kind of ...ummm.. stuff... he's been seeing and learning about at home, huh? You did not say how old this kid was - leaves me curious. Wow. Thanks for sharing???

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Hi Robyn :) He's only 6...
Thanks for your feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes as always, Debra :)

Comment from Earl Corp

Exceptional

This was hilarious! Do you ever look at something and say " I wish I'd wrote that." That's how I felt after reading this poem. I hope you never grow up if that means you dont write items like this anymore. It was definitely worth six stars. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Hi Earl :)
Thank you so much, both for the great feedback and for the very generous 6 stars you awarded for my poop offering! I can't see me growing up anytime soon LOL
Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

OH my dear I have had that with my kids. I remember one of the twins when young kept tripping the toilet and water overflowing, I had the same problem, but these were well written and would make great limerick topic

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Hi Barb :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Glad you weren't too disgusted by the toilet humour! Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Lucky you - having cleaning staff to call on. Did you have to concoct your own photo?

One glitch (I think):
without tears or tauma - should be 'trauma'?

Cheers
Judy

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 Comment Written 25-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2019

Hi Judy, thank goodness for your eagle eye! I appreciate it :)
I googled log in the bog and the picture came up!
Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by JudyE on 25-Jun-2019

I googled 'bra on a fan' and nothing came up! I tried to take my own photo but none of my bras were sexy enough. lol