Pix This 2019
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Assistant Required"art inspired poetry
15 total reviews
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well I am not sure I am quite up for this type of quality sword swallowing shenanigans but I am a great pin cushion for voodoo witchdoctors, so it is something I can aspire to! Not sure why your aim is off, have you checked the throwing knives weight, so they are perfectly balances and poised to be thrown???? Do i want a demonstration and should I be the crash test dummy? This write shows your a swashbuckler, fencing off with quills and your nibs certainly hit the mark with this piece! Just remind me if I am ever to meet you, to get out the riot gear the night before... :)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Well I am not sure I am quite up for this type of quality sword swallowing shenanigans but I am a great pin cushion for voodoo witchdoctors, so it is something I can aspire to! Not sure why your aim is off, have you checked the throwing knives weight, so they are perfectly balances and poised to be thrown???? Do i want a demonstration and should I be the crash test dummy? This write shows your a swashbuckler, fencing off with quills and your nibs certainly hit the mark with this piece! Just remind me if I am ever to meet you, to get out the riot gear the night before... :)
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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LOL! Thanks for your entertaining feedback, Dale :)
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment from misscookie
Excuse me
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
I had to smile for your words will not draw my attention for that job
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Excuse me
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect match
I had to smile for your words will not draw my attention for that job
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Cookie, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra :)
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Your very welcome
cookie
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahhahaahahahahahhahaahhahahaahahahahahhahaahahahahhahahahahahahahaha!
I think this is my favorite response so far!!! Loved it!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Debra,
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahahahahahahhahaahahahahahhahaahhahahaahahahahahhahaahahahahhahahahahahahahaha!
I think this is my favorite response so far!!! Loved it!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Hi Robyn :) Thanks again for your lovely feedback and 6 star award. Very generous of you :) Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Nicely written. Short, sharp, and to the "point." I believe you're on the "cutting" edge of genius here. It's depth and deeper meaning, cut me to the bone. Nothing needs to be chopped. Stands on its own and sticks in one's mind.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Nicely written. Short, sharp, and to the "point." I believe you're on the "cutting" edge of genius here. It's depth and deeper meaning, cut me to the bone. Nothing needs to be chopped. Stands on its own and sticks in one's mind.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Debra. I'm LOL! That sword thrower better pay well that's all I've got to say. I enjoyed reading this. I'm glad you joined in to Picture This. Looking forward to reading more. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hi Debra. I'm LOL! That sword thrower better pay well that's all I've got to say. I enjoyed reading this. I'm glad you joined in to Picture This. Looking forward to reading more. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Marilyn :) I enjoyed writing this one - I wanted to think outside the box with it, that's why it took me a while to actually post. Glad you enjoyed :) Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I totally loved this, the rhyming words are very well done and I love the way you made the limerick go with the picture. It is perfect. I had my daily chuckle
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I totally loved this, the rhyming words are very well done and I love the way you made the limerick go with the picture. It is perfect. I had my daily chuckle
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hi Barb :) Glad to share a laugh with you! Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I sure hope this isn't your Plan B, Debra, in case the impending interview doesn't go well!! Wherever in the world did you find this photo?! And is that what inspired the limerick? (Terrific rhyme and meter, btw. Absolute perfection!)
xo
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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I sure hope this isn't your Plan B, Debra, in case the impending interview doesn't go well!! Wherever in the world did you find this photo?! And is that what inspired the limerick? (Terrific rhyme and meter, btw. Absolute perfection!)
xo
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Hi Rachelle :) Thanks for your great feedback. The picture was provided by the Pix This challenge group... I thought I'd give it a humorous twist! My plan B definitely wouldn't be in the sword throwing line of work!
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
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Phew!! (Plan B could be "a baker." Think of the enormous cakes you could cut with swords THAT big!!)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah....this is one interview I will not be signing up for any time soon, ma'am! :) Like that you took this on a humorous twist, Debra -- should have expected such with your sunshine attitude! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Yeah....this is one interview I will not be signing up for any time soon, ma'am! :) Like that you took this on a humorous twist, Debra -- should have expected such with your sunshine attitude! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Yvette :)
Thanks so much for your lovely feedback :)
Can't believe nobody has stepped forward for the job yet!
Best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from Joy Graham
Nope, I don't enjoy stab wounds. So I'll pass on this job offer. I wish you luck in finding serious responses to this job advertisement :)
I enjoyed your limerick. Well written with a nice lilt in each line that sings along. Nice cheeky feel to it all that gives the limerick that naughty-ness. Good picture to set the tone.
Well done.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Nope, I don't enjoy stab wounds. So I'll pass on this job offer. I wish you luck in finding serious responses to this job advertisement :)
I enjoyed your limerick. Well written with a nice lilt in each line that sings along. Nice cheeky feel to it all that gives the limerick that naughty-ness. Good picture to set the tone.
Well done.
Joy xx
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Joy :) Thank you so much for your great feedback. I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Mark D. R.
very funny; illustration is a good combo for your limerick
I am not volunteering to be the assistant for whatever the pay scale is; my spouse might say it is OK if my insurance policy paid millions for the bad throw LOL
although your rhyme scene uses 'ant', consistent is the correct spelling - although I am bit hesitant to critique your funny post (-;
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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very funny; illustration is a good combo for your limerick
I am not volunteering to be the assistant for whatever the pay scale is; my spouse might say it is OK if my insurance policy paid millions for the bad throw LOL
although your rhyme scene uses 'ant', consistent is the correct spelling - although I am bit hesitant to critique your funny post (-;
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
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Hi Mark :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and for picking up the mistake! I appreciate it and have made the edit :)
Best wishes, Debra
