Reviews from

Tender Whispers

3-5-3 Poetry Contest Entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from DeborahWrite
Excellent
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Dear Author,
I found your poem and photograph well-written and beautiful--even with its poignant story. This is a contest winner and I wish you the best! Deborah

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Deborah. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
    Ron
reply by DeborahWrite on 16-Jun-2019
    You are welcome and have an enjoyable Sunday :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
Excellent
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, and the use of
one continuous thought
is effective.
-Good personification
of eyes and description of whispers.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thank you for the great review, Pam./ I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this short piece.
reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Jun-2019
    You are quite welcome.
Comment from A Little Bird
Excellent
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A tragic, yet beautiful piece. Good job for working within such a confined word limit! It leaves me wondering why she is bidding him farewell? Good luck with the competition!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2019


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2019
    Thank you for the great review, Abby. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.