Comment from Juliette Chamberlain

Excellent

Three perspectives and still no further forward.
I sometimes wonder do our memories play tricks on us - both of your aunts recall the story in a way which reflects their actions as the better one.
The story may be fictional but I do know some people who always recall events in a way that uplifts their own actions whilst denigrating the other.
In the end neither of them got their man.

Warmly,

Juliette

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019

Thank you for th5 stars. You are right on the money. If only we all could communicate well and be honest with ourselves. - Jerry

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

A good story. Actually it's really very good in parts. You're adept at maintaining the POV of the narrator.

I love the description of the two rival courts surrounding the feuding aunts.

Wry ending works well. It's up to the aunts to make the right move.

A bit long and repetitive in parts. However you definitely have a knack for storytelling.

Good luck in the contest.

Blessings, Julia

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2019

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019

Thank you for the stars and the comments. - Jerry

reply by juliaSjames on 13-Jun-2019

You're very welcome