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Comment from Pearl Edwards
A great choice using the Rain forest umbrella of foliage for your TriQuatrain Trisha. I love both the cute artwork and your words.
Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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A great choice using the Rain forest umbrella of foliage for your TriQuatrain Trisha. I love both the cute artwork and your words.
Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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A great review, thank you
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
Very sad topic, but unfortunately realistic. We have to do something quick or we'll have no planet to live on quite soon.
Thanks so much for sharing this poem. The topic is an important one.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Very sad topic, but unfortunately realistic. We have to do something quick or we'll have no planet to live on quite soon.
Thanks so much for sharing this poem. The topic is an important one.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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?We? are reactive not proactive. People smoke until they can?t breathe, why would we take notice until it affects the world Thanks for reviewing.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Okay, now this is a format I'm not familiar with,Trisha, but you've done a good just using it to highlight the rain forest (jungles, we used to call them - lol!). :) ;) Now, if you're OCD (like me), you should pop back in there and eliminate the extra line spacing between stanzas one and two.... otherwise, don't worry about it and I promise to try not to lose sleep over it tonight...LOL! ;) :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Okay, now this is a format I'm not familiar with,Trisha, but you've done a good just using it to highlight the rain forest (jungles, we used to call them - lol!). :) ;) Now, if you're OCD (like me), you should pop back in there and eliminate the extra line spacing between stanzas one and two.... otherwise, don't worry about it and I promise to try not to lose sleep over it tonight...LOL! ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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This is a great review, thank you, Yvette
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Triquatrain poem about the green umbrella in the forest that provides oxygen to us humans to breathe and when that is gone we will all find our death.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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A very well-written Triquatrain poem about the green umbrella in the forest that provides oxygen to us humans to breathe and when that is gone we will all find our death.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Why the human race is so complacent I don?t know!
I appreciated your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Gail Denham
An interesting form. It is said the rain forest is under attack. Man tries to conquer I guess. We see it around here as the folks from Calif. move in, try to change our small town liveability.
Good reminder.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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An interesting form. It is said the rain forest is under attack. Man tries to conquer I guess. We see it around here as the folks from Calif. move in, try to change our small town liveability.
Good reminder.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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They have little regard for ramifications,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like the topics that you are writing about lately, Trisha. You are writing about things that matter to you--that matter to the world. The demise of the rain forest does disturb nature's balance. Repercussions are not confined to the rain forest. Your comment about the four layers of green umbrella is interesting. I had never heard about any layers.
Nice job, Trisha. I'm proud of you for writing so well under all those restrictions.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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I like the topics that you are writing about lately, Trisha. You are writing about things that matter to you--that matter to the world. The demise of the rain forest does disturb nature's balance. Repercussions are not confined to the rain forest. Your comment about the four layers of green umbrella is interesting. I had never heard about any layers.
Nice job, Trisha. I'm proud of you for writing so well under all those restrictions.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thanks for your very kind review Debbie,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this poem you speak about the need, essence, importance and value of green umbrella, umbrella and use and impact of umbrella in our green life and world; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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In this poem you speak about the need, essence, importance and value of green umbrella, umbrella and use and impact of umbrella in our green life and world; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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The green umbrella of canopies in the rain forest is shrinking,
Thanks for your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The rain forests are being protected and there is some restriction to make sure that all the trees are not depleted, maybe we need more legislation as we humans are greedy, this is an interesting write Trisha, I liked 'the green umbrella' love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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The rain forests are being protected and there is some restriction to make sure that all the trees are not depleted, maybe we need more legislation as we humans are greedy, this is an interesting write Trisha, I liked 'the green umbrella' love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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That all sounds very encouraging, but i find it hard to believe. Anyway, I appreciate your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yes, us humans have to smarten up. Mother Nature will always win in the end. We know we'll end up in big trouble if we continue with the destruction. Where's the intelligence? No amount of money will help if we don't have air and water.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Yes, us humans have to smarten up. Mother Nature will always win in the end. We know we'll end up in big trouble if we continue with the destruction. Where's the intelligence? No amount of money will help if we don't have air and water.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your review. Yes, it?s known, but nothing will be done until it gets too late. The human race tends to be reactive, not proactive. Shame!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
This is a very interesting and original take on the 'umbrella' challenge. Your rhyming is very good, and you met all the requirements of the Triquatrain. Nice job. Thanks for participating.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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This is a very interesting and original take on the 'umbrella' challenge. Your rhyming is very good, and you met all the requirements of the Triquatrain. Nice job. Thanks for participating.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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I?m glad it was acceptable. I had a hard time finding subject matter. I really enjoy the club challenges. Thank you for your involvement
Hugs, Trisha