A Sum of the Parts
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about your strengths and weaknesses we all have them and we aloneed knows how to control everything we are. We try to forget the bad things while we show our happiness.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about your strengths and weaknesses we all have them and we aloneed knows how to control everything we are. We try to forget the bad things while we show our happiness.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sophia Delgado
This is a fun poem and the short lines give it a catchy rhythm. I'm sure you lighten the mood in any tough situation! I'm happy you found poetry to be an outlet for that gift. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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This is a fun poem and the short lines give it a catchy rhythm. I'm sure you lighten the mood in any tough situation! I'm happy you found poetry to be an outlet for that gift. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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And thank YOU for reviewing it! I appreciate your encouraging feedback.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the artwork
and presentation.
-I like the imagery,
meter,and rhyme that
create a smooth flow
for your poem.
-You give descriptive
detail about your appearance,
followed by traits you don't like,
and those you do.
-I can relate to your third
verse, and agree about the
importance of protecting family.
-I like the last two verses, too.
-You have given a very good
overview in your bio; it
will be interesting to see
who you are; good luck
in the contest!
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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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-I like the artwork
and presentation.
-I like the imagery,
meter,and rhyme that
create a smooth flow
for your poem.
-You give descriptive
detail about your appearance,
followed by traits you don't like,
and those you do.
-I can relate to your third
verse, and agree about the
importance of protecting family.
-I like the last two verses, too.
-You have given a very good
overview in your bio; it
will be interesting to see
who you are; good luck
in the contest!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Stay tooooooned. (See what I did there, since you have that cute owl in your profile picture?...)
Thanks for the very helpful and specific review. Those are always the best kind.
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"Wh0-00-00, me?!? You are very welcome, and I appreciate your reply. I feel like I have a lot in common with you because of the sense of humor and many of the things you said in your poem!
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Well, definitely the sense of humor! I'm big-time seeing that! We'll compare notes on the rest after my identity is revealed. Deal?
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Sounds like a deal! Nothing like a good mystery!
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; )
