Renaissance of Enchantment
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Chapter Six, Part 2"It was their world long before our existence...
14 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
Kato is rapidly becoming a favorite--a cat person who likes to eat. LOL
This crew has no end to surprises. I am sure there is a big battle brewing on the horizon and they must stick together. On to the next chapter....
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
Kato is rapidly becoming a favorite--a cat person who likes to eat. LOL
This crew has no end to surprises. I am sure there is a big battle brewing on the horizon and they must stick together. On to the next chapter....
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Hooray -- Kato is a 'little' boy after every mom's heart! ;)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I wonder if Memphis will be staying as soon as Maggie enters the picture? I'm so excited to see what happens in the next chapter. Such a great story to read.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
I wonder if Memphis will be staying as soon as Maggie enters the picture? I'm so excited to see what happens in the next chapter. Such a great story to read.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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Hooray for excitement....!! :)
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
We, in Thailand, are twelve hours ahead of Alabama. I've already lived your day and it was wonderful!
Memphis in the kitchen--a beautiful girl workin' on her apples. So southern!
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
We, in Thailand, are twelve hours ahead of Alabama. I've already lived your day and it was wonderful!
Memphis in the kitchen--a beautiful girl workin' on her apples. So southern!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2020
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I've always wanted to visit the East... see? I get to live vicariously through you!! ;) Southern Apple Pie.... Mmmmmm!!! :)
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I've never been East.
Oh, man. Southern Apple Pie!
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No.... I mean the Far East... where you are, silly!! ;) :) I'm trying to enjoy the day you've already had.... but mine is 'sunless'... again. Ugh. More rain and GRAY! ;)
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The Far East is getting more dangerous with the Corona virus so hold off on your want to visit! ha ha
It was 106 degrees F today. We are not even in April, the hottest month of the year yet! I would rather have the rain more than the heat...
Comment from JudyE
I'm waiting for Maggie and Addison to arrive. Maybe next chapter?
Two tiny points:
decided to take on a maternal roll - should be 'role'
We 're - close the gap here
Best wishes
Judy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
I'm waiting for Maggie and Addison to arrive. Maybe next chapter?
Two tiny points:
decided to take on a maternal roll - should be 'role'
We 're - close the gap here
Best wishes
Judy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2019
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Thank you !! ;) ;)
Comment from Stephen Force
Glad your back, This was very intense, I thought you might make the rose/dagger fly off her neck into Peadars' heart:-) You drew a nice scene from start to finish. Very tight, I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
Glad your back, This was very intense, I thought you might make the rose/dagger fly off her neck into Peadars' heart:-) You drew a nice scene from start to finish. Very tight, I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thanx for dropping by on this one Stephen -- glad to hear from you! And glad you liked the living tattoos... a small twist that seemed to work with Lyca! ;) ;) Take care, sir! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sophia Delgado
I love it! You add vivid detail that makes me feel like I'm right there in the room with them. Even with something as simple as a smile--where others would just write "She smiled", you add description that makes it so much more personal and real.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
I love it! You add vivid detail that makes me feel like I'm right there in the room with them. Even with something as simple as a smile--where others would just write "She smiled", you add description that makes it so much more personal and real.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2019
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Thank you so very much for reading, Sophia.... be sure to go in and read some of the previous story so that you can follow along with our fantastical journey! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
Very well done Yvette. You did a great job with catching us up and then going directly into this next chapter. Things were indeed a little fiesty around the table and you provided great descriptions of the changes to each individual. KoKo pulled it all back together just in time. Here's to a productive summer. SMILE
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
Very well done Yvette. You did a great job with catching us up and then going directly into this next chapter. Things were indeed a little fiesty around the table and you provided great descriptions of the changes to each individual. KoKo pulled it all back together just in time. Here's to a productive summer. SMILE
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Productive summer hopefully on the horizon...right now I'm just making myself write in-between just sitting my butt out on the front porch!! :) :) Seriously, though, thanx so much for keeping up with the saga, Ali.... And I'm so glad you enjoyed this exploration of personalities and relationships... they are kinda boring sometimes, but they're necessary to the overall weaving of the tale!! ;) ;) Therefore your comments here mean a lot, ma'am -- thank you again! :) ;) Take care out there and I look forward to your next installment as well! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
Back at the house,the gang is setting themselves for the arrival for Maggie and Addison, they are having.a little squabble, until reminded that their enemies are wanting them to do just that. Well done, we'll need to get back into sway of this great story. A well written episode dear Yvette, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
Back at the house,the gang is setting themselves for the arrival for Maggie and Addison, they are having.a little squabble, until reminded that their enemies are wanting them to do just that. Well done, we'll need to get back into sway of this great story. A well written episode dear Yvette, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for tuning back in and keeping up with the saga, Roy.... And I'm so glad you enjoyed this exploration of personalities and relationships... they are kinda boring sometimes, but they're necessary to the overall weaving of the tale!! ;) ;) Therefore your comments here mean a lot, sir -- thank you again! :) ;) Take care out there and thanx again! ;) ;) Yvette
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That's true Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Very well written and interesting story about some unique characters with very distinctive and other worldly qualities. You did a great job making the flow of action very real with a sense of strong tension in the room. Bill
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
Very well written and interesting story about some unique characters with very distinctive and other worldly qualities. You did a great job making the flow of action very real with a sense of strong tension in the room. Bill
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for keeping up with the saga, Bill.... And I'm so glad you enjoyed this exploration of personalities and relationships... they are kinda boring sometimes, but they're necessary to the overall weaving of the tale!! ;) ;) Therefore your comments here mean a lot, sir -- thank you again! :) ;) Take care out there and thanx again! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter, everyone seems to be excited to receive the new guests and everyone is preparing and make their own plans to entertain the newcomers.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
A very well-written chapter, everyone seems to be excited to receive the new guests and everyone is preparing and make their own plans to entertain the newcomers.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thanx so much for keeping up with the gang here, Sandra -- glad you enjoyed this exploration of personalities and relationships... they are kinda boring, I suppose, but they're necessary to the overall weaving of the tale!! ;) ;) Take care over there and thanx again! ;) ;) Yvette