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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "There's Always One"art inspired poetry
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Comment from Heather Knight
I love the way this poem rhymes (like all of yours), but I also like the content. You are so very right. As they say, pride comes before a fall.
Very funny and at the same time food for thought.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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I love the way this poem rhymes (like all of yours), but I also like the content. You are so very right. As they say, pride comes before a fall.
Very funny and at the same time food for thought.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Hi Maria :) Thanks so much for your lovely feedback and for the 6 stars - very generous of you (I appreciate it!) Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
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You deserve them. xxx
Comment from JudyE
I always enjoy your verses as there is always a nice rhythm to them which must fit with any OCD compulsions I might have. These are certainly cute frogs.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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I always enjoy your verses as there is always a nice rhythm to them which must fit with any OCD compulsions I might have. These are certainly cute frogs.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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LOL - I'm a rhythm and rhyme junkie!! Thanks for commenting on that - it means a lot! Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a super poem, Debra. Glad you made this post for the Picture This Club. I like the message which is so appropriate to the image. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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This is a super poem, Debra. Glad you made this post for the Picture This Club. I like the message which is so appropriate to the image. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Hi Marilyn :) Thanks so much for your lovely feedback. I really enjoyed writing the poem - the artwork is great! Fab choice ;)
Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hahahah!! I like how it's funny and insouciant and adorable...then BAM! It offers up Motherly Advice in the subtlest of ways. EXCELLENT poem, Debra. I absolutely love it!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Hahahah!! I like how it's funny and insouciant and adorable...then BAM! It offers up Motherly Advice in the subtlest of ways. EXCELLENT poem, Debra. I absolutely love it!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much, Rachelle, for your great feedback and generous 6 star award! I'm honoured, truly.
Best wishes to you as always, Debra :) x
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xo
Comment from Sally Law
I think everyone BUT me is in this potlatch poetry contest. How ever will the judges decide? Yours is perfectly adorable and so fun. The power struggle is real in a frogs life or real life.
Always my best to you and yours, dear Debra,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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I think everyone BUT me is in this potlatch poetry contest. How ever will the judges decide? Yours is perfectly adorable and so fun. The power struggle is real in a frogs life or real life.
Always my best to you and yours, dear Debra,
Sal xo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, Sal :) I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! Best wishes as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
ha ha loving the picture here! Something's telling me his colleagues and "friends" will be telling him to hop it if it does that too often! I know the sort of person you mean, bigs themselves up by putting others down, but doing it that way means its lonely at the top... and if you are at the top it is easier to pull the rug from under him! No matter where you are, just remember there are those above you that you keep at loft heights and there are always people below you holding you firm! I found this poem ribbiting and is true to life and in a strange way reminds me of the "When the cradle rocks" lullaby! Great stuff!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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ha ha loving the picture here! Something's telling me his colleagues and "friends" will be telling him to hop it if it does that too often! I know the sort of person you mean, bigs themselves up by putting others down, but doing it that way means its lonely at the top... and if you are at the top it is easier to pull the rug from under him! No matter where you are, just remember there are those above you that you keep at loft heights and there are always people below you holding you firm! I found this poem ribbiting and is true to life and in a strange way reminds me of the "When the cradle rocks" lullaby! Great stuff!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Cheers, Dale :) I appreciate your lovely feedback as always! Best wishes to you, Debra :) x
Comment from Patty Palmer
There's always one in the crowd that has to ruin the fun for every And he usually is the one who doesn't stop to things through and then everyone follows them!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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There's always one in the crowd that has to ruin the fun for every And he usually is the one who doesn't stop to things through and then everyone follows them!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Patricia :) I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That's perfect, Debra! I can just see those three frogs as three children and one wanting to best the others. You've really captured this perfectly, very well done!! xxx Sandra x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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That's perfect, Debra! I can just see those three frogs as three children and one wanting to best the others. You've really captured this perfectly, very well done!! xxx Sandra x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Sandra :) I appreciate it! Best wishes to you as always, Debra :) x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this made me smile and these frogs have their own individual personalities it seems here! You certainly brought them to life with your poem Debra, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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He he he, this made me smile and these frogs have their own individual personalities it seems here! You certainly brought them to life with your poem Debra, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Dolly :) Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent poem about a cocky frog. Now that is a concept that I have never entertained. That is a creative use of extending human qualities to a frog. Great entry for that club.
Bill
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Excellent poem about a cocky frog. Now that is a concept that I have never entertained. That is a creative use of extending human qualities to a frog. Great entry for that club.
Bill
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Bill :) Best wishes, Debra
