Kleptomania
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Comment from misscookie
I love it
I love the artwork you choose t go with your poem
It is a perfect match
Oh how I can relate to our every words
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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I love it
I love the artwork you choose t go with your poem
It is a perfect match
Oh how I can relate to our every words
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Cookie! I appreciate this review very much.
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Your very welcome, peace God be with you and your's
cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the people who suffer from kleptomania, they cannot resist stealing something from another when they have the opportunity and ability to get away with it.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about the people who suffer from kleptomania, they cannot resist stealing something from another when they have the opportunity and ability to get away with it.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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The thrill of the challenge, I think. Thanks, Sandra.
Comment from J.P. Marie
I love the last line. Very witty. I also like how you made it rhyme even though the same word ends the sentence. It reads very smoothly and adds humor to the serious subject. Great job!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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I love the last line. Very witty. I also like how you made it rhyme even though the same word ends the sentence. It reads very smoothly and adds humor to the serious subject. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thanks, J.P. Marie! I appreciate your feedback very much.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
I laughed out loud when I got to the punchline. That is a funny poem. In addition to the humor you did a nice job on rhyme and meter as well. I will have to remember if I ever become a kleptomaniac I need to take something for it. LOL -Robert-
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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I laughed out loud when I got to the punchline. That is a funny poem. In addition to the humor you did a nice job on rhyme and meter as well. I will have to remember if I ever become a kleptomaniac I need to take something for it. LOL -Robert-
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Yes, it's always good to know there's a cure available!
Comment from pome lover
very good - good rhyme and perfect accompanying picture - but what, pray tell, can you take for kleptomania?? A dose of jail?
Just kidding. You did, indeed, treat a serious subject with humor. Cute poem. and good luck in the contest.
pome lover
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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very good - good rhyme and perfect accompanying picture - but what, pray tell, can you take for kleptomania?? A dose of jail?
Just kidding. You did, indeed, treat a serious subject with humor. Cute poem. and good luck in the contest.
pome lover
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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You can take whatever doesn't belong to you!! hahahahaha.
Thanks for the fun review, Pome lover.
Comment from Michele Harber
This is very cute and very clever. "Take something for it" is a very well done play on words, and you made an excellent rhyme of "abhor it" and "for it." I suspect you'll "take" a lot of contest votes.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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This is very cute and very clever. "Take something for it" is a very well done play on words, and you made an excellent rhyme of "abhor it" and "for it." I suspect you'll "take" a lot of contest votes.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Hopefully not in that D.Q. kind of way, though! Thank you for the funny and encouraging review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha!
You can always take something for it, you said.
That's hilarious.
Kleptomania is most definitely no laughing matter, at least not to those who suffer from its cause and effects.
Good poem, very punny.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Hahahaha!
You can always take something for it, you said.
That's hilarious.
Kleptomania is most definitely no laughing matter, at least not to those who suffer from its cause and effects.
Good poem, very punny.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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The whole contest is full of awful afflictions that we're to write funny poems about! A little unusual...but then, that's my calling card, so I signed right up!
Thanks for the review, Dean.
Comment from 24chas
This was hilarious, mystery poet. I love it. I really needed a laugh tonight and this was perfect for it. I know this will have to win this contest. I can't imagine anything better. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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This was hilarious, mystery poet. I love it. I really needed a laugh tonight and this was perfect for it. I know this will have to win this contest. I can't imagine anything better. Good luck!
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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No, there are MANY good offerings. It's a very fun contest premise, and the writers on this site are very funny and creative.
Thank you for the encouragement, though, 24chas.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Change is permanent, world is changing, we are changing, kleptomania is changing, this serious thing has a bright side today, now you can always take something for it; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Change is permanent, world is changing, we are changing, kleptomania is changing, this serious thing has a bright side today, now you can always take something for it; well said, well done. Keep writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you.
