A Magical Meeting
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Lovely fantasy poem of a magical, musical meeting of long ago but one that you're still seeking. It could be compared to life, looking for that magical, happy place. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Lovely fantasy poem of a magical, musical meeting of long ago but one that you're still seeking. It could be compared to life, looking for that magical, happy place. Nice one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 15-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2019
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Thank you. True, we're always searching for that one special place.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, oh sweet love....and memories not forgotten...
I don't know my sweet friend how far back we can go before it is to late...but we can always dream...sigh....I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture and the colors...very nicely written you...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Hi Yvonne, oh sweet love....and memories not forgotten...
I don't know my sweet friend how far back we can go before it is to late...but we can always dream...sigh....I love your poem sweet girl...and love your picture and the colors...very nicely written you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Linda. Always good to hear from you.
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your so welcome...and always good to see you...love you...xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
Love the music of your poem, Yvonne. You have such well chosen rhymes and the wrapping of each quatrain is expertly done. The sense of yearning for that magical moment really comes through!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Love the music of your poem, Yvonne. You have such well chosen rhymes and the wrapping of each quatrain is expertly done. The sense of yearning for that magical moment really comes through!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for this. What a wonderful review.
Comment from judiverse
Great artwork choice. It really looks like the enchanted place you describe in your poem. You have a great description of this spot you remember. It is so true that we have lasting memories of those special childhood places.
The mysterious fellow with the flute proves very captivating, but he disappears. He's a Pan-like creature, one who entices people to these places in the words. Excellent work with your line turnabout. judi
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Great artwork choice. It really looks like the enchanted place you describe in your poem. You have a great description of this spot you remember. It is so true that we have lasting memories of those special childhood places.
The mysterious fellow with the flute proves very captivating, but he disappears. He's a Pan-like creature, one who entices people to these places in the words. Excellent work with your line turnabout. judi
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Judi.
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You're very welcome. Great poem. judi
Comment from Pantygynt
Both from the piucture and the storyt in this poem it would appear you have been wandering in the Allt-y-Rhiw woodland of my recently posted short stories. These trees appear similarly twisted and by music 's magic too. These have to be sessile oaks. Apparently the national tree of Ireland.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Both from the piucture and the storyt in this poem it would appear you have been wandering in the Allt-y-Rhiw woodland of my recently posted short stories. These trees appear similarly twisted and by music 's magic too. These have to be sessile oaks. Apparently the national tree of Ireland.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Awww, so that's why the place was so mysterious. 8-) Thanks, Jim.
Comment from Sally Law
I like this a magical, mysterious wood. It looks like a place of romantic memories, too. Maybe a love song floated its way into your heart? A well penned poem, crowned with lovely art.
All my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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I like this a magical, mysterious wood. It looks like a place of romantic memories, too. Maybe a love song floated its way into your heart? A well penned poem, crowned with lovely art.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Sally.
Comment from Gail Denham
There are such special places - a house by the sea - visiting a castle in Wales where the air was actually greenish blue it seemed. A brilliant day - the sun lighting up the castle - and someone playing Welsh choir music. Yes, I'd like to go to that place again.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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There are such special places - a house by the sea - visiting a castle in Wales where the air was actually greenish blue it seemed. A brilliant day - the sun lighting up the castle - and someone playing Welsh choir music. Yes, I'd like to go to that place again.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for a lovely review.
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Yvonne, this is not only a magic poem you've written but it is so poetically beautiful. You create the sweetest of atmosphere. What can I say? I was there and saw it all. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Awe, Yvonne, this is not only a magic poem you've written but it is so poetically beautiful. You create the sweetest of atmosphere. What can I say? I was there and saw it all. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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I'm so glad. Thank you, Ulla.
Comment from LIJ Red
Do you suppose that is the guy who went through Hamelin and piped out the rats and brats? Just kidding...there are places that puzzle psychologists with their aura....excellent poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Do you suppose that is the guy who went through Hamelin and piped out the rats and brats? Just kidding...there are places that puzzle psychologists with their aura....excellent poem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you. He could be the pied piper. Who knows?
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I love this presentation, Yvonne. Your words flow smoothly with super rhymes. I remember the first part of this story. This one picks up and adds so much to that one. Where would this be if not for the first one. I can feel the way the one on the poem is longing to find that place again. The font, the picture, the rhymes, and the message all work together to create a great and memorable read. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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I love this presentation, Yvonne. Your words flow smoothly with super rhymes. I remember the first part of this story. This one picks up and adds so much to that one. Where would this be if not for the first one. I can feel the way the one on the poem is longing to find that place again. The font, the picture, the rhymes, and the message all work together to create a great and memorable read. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2019
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Thank you for this beautiful review. It's made my day.
