Greatest Song
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a fine, uplifting poem this is, using the four words you were given with a nice rhythm and a cogent, cohesive message. No easy task, but you rose like a champion to the challenge. I even like the picture you chose! I bet you will do well with this entry! Good luck to you, Mystery Writer. xo
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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What a fine, uplifting poem this is, using the four words you were given with a nice rhythm and a cogent, cohesive message. No easy task, but you rose like a champion to the challenge. I even like the picture you chose! I bet you will do well with this entry! Good luck to you, Mystery Writer. xo
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are very welcome. xo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like what you were able to come up with using the words you were given. I like the message of this and the flow is beautiful. The artwork is a wonderful compliment. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and faith filled work. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I like what you were able to come up with using the words you were given. I like the message of this and the flow is beautiful. The artwork is a wonderful compliment. I enjoyed reading this inspirational and faith filled work. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a really pretty poem The best song ever written is of life. And the greatest song writer ever is the Lord!
"Keep up the good work"
Patty
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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This is a really pretty poem The best song ever written is of life. And the greatest song writer ever is the Lord!
"Keep up the good work"
Patty
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very well-written, enthusiastic, uplifting piece. It conveys a moving theme, faithfully persevering through challenges and being grateful for good time. Is "echo's" correct?
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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This is a very well-written, enthusiastic, uplifting piece. It conveys a moving theme, faithfully persevering through challenges and being grateful for good time. Is "echo's" correct?
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
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Comment from Gail Denham
Well done - you fulfilled the contest rules, while making sure readers knew of what you bellowed most - the message of Jesus Christ. Rejoice with singing we're told.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Well done - you fulfilled the contest rules, while making sure readers knew of what you bellowed most - the message of Jesus Christ. Rejoice with singing we're told.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a fine poem about the vagaries of life. The images are strong, such as firm paths, long strides, and a bellowing soul. The rhymes are also effective. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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This is a fine poem about the vagaries of life. The images are strong, such as firm paths, long strides, and a bellowing soul. The rhymes are also effective. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written song/poem aboutique singing songs to praise God is always beautiful to hear, but the song that we sing in our heart is always the greatest song of all.
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A very well-written song/poem aboutique singing songs to praise God is always beautiful to hear, but the song that we sing in our heart is always the greatest song of all.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You fulfilled the brief here and used all those words without me noticing, your poem is not at all forced but flows like a dream and I love the sentiments too, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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You fulfilled the brief here and used all those words without me noticing, your poem is not at all forced but flows like a dream and I love the sentiments too, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks you have made your life journey fully as you have touched and seen both sides of life, as enjoyed the sun and endured the rain and pain but your heart still pumps life's greatest song; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks you have made your life journey fully as you have touched and seen both sides of life, as enjoyed the sun and endured the rain and pain but your heart still pumps life's greatest song; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much
