Determined To Make It
50 word story contest entry13 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Ha - too funny. Not for the older lady however, rather you hit a cat I think. But it's true - these contests come at you faster than you can think. I barely get a couple done.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
Ha - too funny. Not for the older lady however, rather you hit a cat I think. But it's true - these contests come at you faster than you can think. I barely get a couple done.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Gail. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Richard J
Well,
If this speedy little jaunt doesn't favorably catch the judges' attention for a surefire win, I don't know what will.
Great picture choice, with original, creative imagery, and with a huge guffaw from me ... I gleefully thank you! ~ Richard : )
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
Well,
If this speedy little jaunt doesn't favorably catch the judges' attention for a surefire win, I don't know what will.
Great picture choice, with original, creative imagery, and with a huge guffaw from me ... I gleefully thank you! ~ Richard : )
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Richard. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great weekend.
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You are most welcome, and I thank you kindly, too, Sir DS. : )
Comment from Patty Palmer
I thought this was pretty funny and even funnier yet when you were racing home to get in the contest. Good luck with the contest. "Keep on keeping on!"
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
I thought this was pretty funny and even funnier yet when you were racing home to get in the contest. Good luck with the contest. "Keep on keeping on!"
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Patricia. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is some determination. I love how in the end it was all about this contest. Al the damage and destruction that one can cause just trying to get something done is amazing and this piece brings that to light.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
That is some determination. I love how in the end it was all about this contest. Al the damage and destruction that one can cause just trying to get something done is amazing and this piece brings that to light.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Mia. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
What a cute short story!! I've felt that way before when turning in a story, also felt that way when hurrying home to watch Game of Thrones, but that's it's own story.
Great luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
What a cute short story!! I've felt that way before when turning in a story, also felt that way when hurrying home to watch Game of Thrones, but that's it's own story.
Great luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Rhonda. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha. A flash fiction piece that springs an original joke on the last line. . You've chosen a good photo to accompany it as well :)
Good luck with the competition.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
Ha, ha. A flash fiction piece that springs an original joke on the last line. . You've chosen a good photo to accompany it as well :)
Good luck with the competition.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Alex. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
Comment from damommy
Hahaha. This is one of the funniest stories I've read. You did a great job with just 50 words. I'm so glad you made it in time for the contest. Good luck with that.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
Hahaha. This is one of the funniest stories I've read. You did a great job with just 50 words. I'm so glad you made it in time for the contest. Good luck with that.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, DM. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Comment from jenintorre
I love this story, it is my kind of humour. I think you have nailed it here. Well chosen artwork too.
You should win. Good luck and best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
I love this story, it is my kind of humour. I think you have nailed it here. Well chosen artwork too.
You should win. Good luck and best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jen. Yeah. I like adding my own twisted brand of humor on here. Glad to see someone else likes it as well. I really appreciate the generous stars I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great weekend.
Comment from LyndaS
How fun was this? You did a great job with this challenge. Love the pic and your little story was soooo funny. Good luck in the booth. Loved this. Lynda
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
How fun was this? You did a great job with this challenge. Love the pic and your little story was soooo funny. Good luck in the booth. Loved this. Lynda
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Lynda. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Wow! How can anyone compete with such a valiantly made entry! You've outdone yourself, both in effort and humor! Best wishes in the contest! Something good should come of this day for you, after all of that.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
Wow! How can anyone compete with such a valiantly made entry! You've outdone yourself, both in effort and humor! Best wishes in the contest! Something good should come of this day for you, after all of that.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Carla. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.