Aftermath
A short verse7 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
In a few simple words and a fitting piece of artwork you describe and illustrate the emotion of jealousy well. Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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In a few simple words and a fitting piece of artwork you describe and illustrate the emotion of jealousy well. Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 05-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much!
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You are most kindly welcome.
~Joan
Comment from Carla Trinklein
An insidious thing, jealousy. The tiniest germ permeates every facet of a relationship. Your poem captures this truth in very few, well-chosen words. Great job!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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An insidious thing, jealousy. The tiniest germ permeates every facet of a relationship. Your poem captures this truth in very few, well-chosen words. Great job!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you. Carla!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Not one word here, five words to describe Jealousy perfectly, a joy to read and hearts break when the green eyed monster rears its ugly head, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Not one word here, five words to describe Jealousy perfectly, a joy to read and hearts break when the green eyed monster rears its ugly head, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much, Dolly!!
Comment from RodG
If the root of all evil is money, surely the root of all shattered relationships is jealousy. Your message comes across clear and distinctly in only ten syllables. Rod
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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If the root of all evil is money, surely the root of all shattered relationships is jealousy. Your message comes across clear and distinctly in only ten syllables. Rod
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you Rod!!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Jealousy brings negative results and produces no positive effect; jealousy destroys and breaks a trusting heart; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Jealousy brings negative results and produces no positive effect; jealousy destroys and breaks a trusting heart; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much, DR!
Comment from jenintorre
This poem on jealousy is very short but very poignant and meaningful. Tha artwork you have chosen is perfect. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Bestwishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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This poem on jealousy is very short but very poignant and meaningful. Tha artwork you have chosen is perfect. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Bestwishes. Jen.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much, Jen!!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wow! Such a powerful message in such a short poem! It amazes when a writer can do this so well! And the photo you found to display it is equally excellent. This is front-runner material for this contest, in my opinion. Good luck to you. xo
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Wow! Such a powerful message in such a short poem! It amazes when a writer can do this so well! And the photo you found to display it is equally excellent. This is front-runner material for this contest, in my opinion. Good luck to you. xo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much, Rachelle!
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My pleasure! xo
