Life of the Party
Being able to get noticed is a life skill36 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
FSBFF, this shows your usual wit, and just how adept you are at the twist ending. Of course, the fact that they offered "cocktail weiners" did give away that they were talking to a dog. After all, if they were speaking to a woman, they'd have been offering their "foot-longs." ;-)
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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FSBFF, this shows your usual wit, and just how adept you are at the twist ending. Of course, the fact that they offered "cocktail weiners" did give away that they were talking to a dog. After all, if they were speaking to a woman, they'd have been offering their "foot-longs." ;-)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Oh, now Michele Harber!!! Is that typed with the same fingers you braid your daughter's hair??? Tsk, tsk, HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA, tsk, tsk, you're so freaking hilarious, tsk, tsk, hahahahahaha...
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Luckily, since we got her hair cut, it's too short to braid, so I guess I'm safe on that count. In all fairness to me, of course, can you honestly say you've ever met a man whose come-on line was, "Wanna see my cocktail weiner?" Just sayin' ...
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No, but I never had anyone offer a foot-long, either. The closest encounter of that kind was a guy who asked me if I'd like some hot stew. (His name was Stew.) (I declined.)
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If I were you, I'd have declined just on the basis that you had a much more sophisticated sense of humor than he did (and, apparently, than I do).
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Plus he was missing teeth...
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(call me shallow...)
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I hope you?re getting royalties off the song of the same name.
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At least I now know the inspiration for your ?False Teeth? entry.
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I knew you were going to say that!!! I honest-to-gawd KNEW that was your next comment!!!
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Ohhh, yeah; absolutely. (What I'll probably get is a copyright infringement letter!!)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Rachelle,
Lol, I really liked this piece. It funny when you get to the end, expecting a brief jealousy tale but it's nothing of the sort.
Nice one and best of luck with it.
G
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Hi Rachelle,
Lol, I really liked this piece. It funny when you get to the end, expecting a brief jealousy tale but it's nothing of the sort.
Nice one and best of luck with it.
G
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you, GMG. I appreciate the review. xo
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It sounds like you et some real classy fellas. What was desert, smores? Sounds like my kind of shindig. I have never been to Arkansas, but it seems charming.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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It sounds like you et some real classy fellas. What was desert, smores? Sounds like my kind of shindig. I have never been to Arkansas, but it seems charming.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Dogs aren't as discerning as you! Thanks for the amusing review. xo
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really funny Rachelle. What are you saying or trying not to say? I can get quite a few different things from this. Vet's orders. Now that's pretty PRICELESS! You're cracking me up and I can't take any more! I could probably go into some detail, but, that's not necessary. Thanks for making me laugh with this humorous work that you've penned here. Well done! Keep them coming.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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This is really funny Rachelle. What are you saying or trying not to say? I can get quite a few different things from this. Vet's orders. Now that's pretty PRICELESS! You're cracking me up and I can't take any more! I could probably go into some detail, but, that's not necessary. Thanks for making me laugh with this humorous work that you've penned here. Well done! Keep them coming.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I love dribble fiction because it leads the reader down one road and then surprises them with a surprise at the end of it. I'm glad you had a good FS laugh today, Jeffrey. Thanks for your delightful review. xo
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Rachelle Allen,
Lovely piece of General Fiction meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
"..."Stop!" I cry. "No spicy foods. Vet's orders."
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Hello Rachelle Allen,
Lovely piece of General Fiction meeting the required norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
"..."Stop!" I cry. "No spicy foods. Vet's orders."
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thank you, RPSaxena! xo
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Rachelle Allen, Most Welcome
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Have a pleasant weekend!
~ RP
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The same to you. xo
Comment from nomi338
Oh how clever you are. I never guessed that you were describing men's reaction to a horse, or was it a dog? Either way I was convinced that y he object of the men's interest was a beautiful young woman. Very good job of deception.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Oh how clever you are. I never guessed that you were describing men's reaction to a horse, or was it a dog? Either way I was convinced that y he object of the men's interest was a beautiful young woman. Very good job of deception.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Definitely a dog, Nomi! Horses have no place at my house parties!
Thanks for the excellent review. xo
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Thank you for your excellent job of fooling me so artfully.
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Oh, it is my pleasure!! Thank you for liking me anyway afterward!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fifty word flash fiction. When a girl is the life of the party all the men will try to get her attention and will do anything to win her favor.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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A very well-written fifty word flash fiction. When a girl is the life of the party all the men will try to get her attention and will do anything to win her favor.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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So true!
Comment from Ulla
Hahahaha, Rachelle, you certainly had me fooled on this on until the very end. So it's all bout your pet who's not allowed to take part in the fun. Great entry for the contest. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Hahahaha, Rachelle, you certainly had me fooled on this on until the very end. So it's all bout your pet who's not allowed to take part in the fun. Great entry for the contest. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Ulla, for laughing along! I appreciate the fun review. xo
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaaa, this is just terrific Rachelle. You gotta love a shiny coat and what a wonderfully bit of misdirection in this perfect fifty word flash.
I'm wishing you much great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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Haaaaaaa, this is just terrific Rachelle. You gotta love a shiny coat and what a wonderfully bit of misdirection in this perfect fifty word flash.
I'm wishing you much great luck with the Contest Committee with this gem. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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I appreciate that very much, Gloria. Thank you! xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile as your pet moves among the guests hoping for tit-bits but of course we can't feed our pets rubbish even if we humans drink poison often! He he he, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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This made me smile as your pet moves among the guests hoping for tit-bits but of course we can't feed our pets rubbish even if we humans drink poison often! He he he, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2019
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That's right; we want BETTER for them!!! (They're nicer, after all...)
Thanks for the fun review, Dolly. Always appreciated. xo
