Hide-away
A place for lovers4 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
Very pretty! The story told was neat! it flowed easily as it's read. The rhyme and rhythm was perfect. Made it bouncy to read. I like reading poems that I can bounce through and enjoy rather than having to stop at each line to figure out the meaning great poem!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Very pretty! The story told was neat! it flowed easily as it's read. The rhyme and rhythm was perfect. Made it bouncy to read. I like reading poems that I can bounce through and enjoy rather than having to stop at each line to figure out the meaning great poem!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2019
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Thank you Pat for your kind review and words, much appreciated.
Comment from l.raven
every couple should have a secret place they
can go...where they are all they see...where they
are all they hear...where they can share their love...
I love your love poem...and love your picture...very well
written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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every couple should have a secret place they
can go...where they are all they see...where they
are all they hear...where they can share their love...
I love your love poem...and love your picture...very well
written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you Linda. One of my favorite topics is love, especially for God, Country and my wonderful family. I actually wrote this for my
loving wife in 82. After over 60 years with her, she passed April 20, 2015, at 1:40 pm.
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I am so sorry for the loss of your wife...and 60 years is amazing...my parents were married 63...and dad passed a year and a half ago...mom is 90 this year...your so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from C T Curtis
I think this is a very lovely poem (sorry! no pun intended). You've written it very well and I enjoyed it very much. I'm curious as to why that particular picture or perhaps there is no reason. Anyway, I really like the poem!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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I think this is a very lovely poem (sorry! no pun intended). You've written it very well and I enjoyed it very much. I'm curious as to why that particular picture or perhaps there is no reason. Anyway, I really like the poem!
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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The picture reminded me of all the time my wife (now deceased) and I spent trying to get some alone time on horseback. Thanks for the review and five stars.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
I don't know if that place exists on planet Earth but I enjoyed your metric rhyming effort to define such a place. I liked the rhyme scheme and enjoyed the verse. -Robert-
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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I don't know if that place exists on planet Earth but I enjoyed your metric rhyming effort to define such a place. I liked the rhyme scheme and enjoyed the verse. -Robert-
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Hey Bob, my wife and I used to saddle our horses and ride out. I guess we never found the perfect hideaway, but we managed to have some alone time. Thank you for the five stars.
