Finding Home
contest entry10 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Short, sweet, and full of love -both this poem as well as your sweet feline! They certainly can make short work of us, can't they? And to that, I say, "Thank goodness!" Wonderful piece. Best of luck in the contest. xo
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Short, sweet, and full of love -both this poem as well as your sweet feline! They certainly can make short work of us, can't they? And to that, I say, "Thank goodness!" Wonderful piece. Best of luck in the contest. xo
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Hi Rachelle :)
Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate them both. Kind regards as always, Debra :) x
Comment from BeasPeas
What a wonderful poem, Debra. So glad your kitty is with you and that you have each other. All of my animals come to me in a similar way. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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What a wonderful poem, Debra. So glad your kitty is with you and that you have each other. All of my animals come to me in a similar way. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for your empathetic feedback, Marilyn :) I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen - syllable poem, Finding Home, presented in two lines and fourteen words, reveals the uniting of a cat and someone with a cat-shaped hole in their heart needing filling.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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This fifteen - syllable poem, Finding Home, presented in two lines and fourteen words, reveals the uniting of a cat and someone with a cat-shaped hole in their heart needing filling.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Bill. I appreciate it. Best wishes...:)
Comment from Heather Knight
He's so cute! I found mine under a bush by the pool.
That's what happens with these fluffy toys: we fall in love with them.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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He's so cute! I found mine under a bush by the pool.
That's what happens with these fluffy toys: we fall in love with them.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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Thanks so much for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) Kindest regards...x
Comment from Mark D. R.
So you pick up stray cats routinely just to write a FS verse? Ideas for poems come from our imagination or reality - good for you!
Nice illustration to accompany your sweet little poem
Mark
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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So you pick up stray cats routinely just to write a FS verse? Ideas for poems come from our imagination or reality - good for you!
Nice illustration to accompany your sweet little poem
Mark
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Hi Mark, thank you for your feedback :) Inspiration comes from wherever it comes! Best wishes...
Comment from susand3022
Awww... how very sweet!!! I sure do know how that can happen! :) This is a well-written 15-syllable poem. I've had almost the same experience. I was living in a frat during the summer one year. A girl down the hall 'rescued' a kitty from the roadside. She'd keep it in her room, full of fleas, no company for days at a time. I finally rescued it from her.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Awww... how very sweet!!! I sure do know how that can happen! :) This is a well-written 15-syllable poem. I've had almost the same experience. I was living in a frat during the summer one year. A girl down the hall 'rescued' a kitty from the roadside. She'd keep it in her room, full of fleas, no company for days at a time. I finally rescued it from her.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Hi :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I'm glad you rescued the poor kitty - it was surely no better off cooped up on its own than it was beside the road...! Best wishes...
Comment from Colin John
Very nice poem and Cat and it's identical to my Cat except for the white paws. Glad she made it and wonder if he will stay, ps mine is a girl. Kind regards Colin
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Very nice poem and Cat and it's identical to my Cat except for the white paws. Glad she made it and wonder if he will stay, ps mine is a girl. Kind regards Colin
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you for your feedback, Colin. I appreciate it...:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet write and when to beings come together and find love then there is a bond for life and your poem is loving and and kind, loved it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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This is a sweet write and when to beings come together and find love then there is a bond for life and your poem is loving and and kind, loved it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Dolly, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes...:)
Comment from juliaSjames
I enjoyed reading your delightful short poem in perfect syllable count. Telling a story in poetic style is always a challenge. Telling it in 15 syllables is a minor miracle, but you made it look easy.
I had the same experience years ago. Other cats joined the household over time, but none took Tigger's place in my heart.
Wishing you well in the prompt.
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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I enjoyed reading your delightful short poem in perfect syllable count. Telling a story in poetic style is always a challenge. Telling it in 15 syllables is a minor miracle, but you made it look easy.
I had the same experience years ago. Other cats joined the household over time, but none took Tigger's place in my heart.
Wishing you well in the prompt.
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Julia, for your kind and empathetic feedback. I appreciate it :) Your generous 6 star award has made my evening! Thank you for that, and for the good luck wishes also :) Sending you my best... :)
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You're welcome. I loved it.
Blessings, Julia
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Two hearts find each other and create a home. What more could anyone ask for? This is sweet, simple and to the point. Good luck in the voting!
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Two hearts find each other and create a home. What more could anyone ask for? This is sweet, simple and to the point. Good luck in the voting!
Comment Written 29-May-2019
reply by the author on 30-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Robyn, for your lovely feedback and for the good luck wishes. I appreciate both :) Kindest regards...
