America
Be proud of our country.3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this great reminder about what our nation's flag means and how we should take pride in flying this flag not only on holidays but everyday. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for this great reminder about what our nation's flag means and how we should take pride in flying this flag not only on holidays but everyday. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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We have lost so much of our patriotism. It seems some of our people are turning their backs, not only on our flag, our pledge and our God.
I believe that is why we are in the fix we are in. Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A perfect offering for the contest and such a wonderful reminder to all of us! ;) I would suggt, perhaps, consider shortening the first line of your second quatrain... ;) A focus on the symbol of unity for the country -- great job! Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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A perfect offering for the contest and such a wonderful reminder to all of us! ;) I would suggt, perhaps, consider shortening the first line of your second quatrain... ;) A focus on the symbol of unity for the country -- great job! Thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for your excellent review and stars. Also for making my poem better.
Comment from dragonpoet
I like how you give the meaning of the colors and stars of our flag and remind us to be patriotic all year round just not on holidays that remind us of birth and death.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I like how you give the meaning of the colors and stars of our flag and remind us to be patriotic all year round just not on holidays that remind us of birth and death.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and stars.
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You're welcome on both accounts.
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