Summer Fun
A Tyburn entry7 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is an excellent contest entry. I do believe you have nailed the Tyburn.
I especially liked that it flowed well and made sense. Tyburns are not as easy to create as they look to be. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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This is an excellent contest entry. I do believe you have nailed the Tyburn.
I especially liked that it flowed well and made sense. Tyburns are not as easy to create as they look to be. Great job!
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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So glad you liked this fun piece!
Comment from LisaMay
I love your sweet poem. The cute photo reminded me of myself at that age and Dad made up a poem for me: "Wouldn't it be funny, to see a little bunny, sitting on the dunny, eating bread and honey." Your poem is much better than my father's effort, but it did get me interested in poetry.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I love your sweet poem. The cute photo reminded me of myself at that age and Dad made up a poem for me: "Wouldn't it be funny, to see a little bunny, sitting on the dunny, eating bread and honey." Your poem is much better than my father's effort, but it did get me interested in poetry.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this fun little piece. Your Dad's poem was adorable!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, you just cannot help but grin at this one... mainly because you could have put a female of any age in your pic and it would have worked! :) ;) Great job and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Oh, you just cannot help but grin at this one... mainly because you could have put a female of any age in your pic and it would have worked! :) ;) Great job and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for the positive feedback!
Comment from fm wright
Wonderful tyburn! The words as well as the sentences flow very well together. The picture adds the perfect touch. Beautifully written! Wish you the best with this entry!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Wonderful tyburn! The words as well as the sentences flow very well together. The picture adds the perfect touch. Beautifully written! Wish you the best with this entry!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging feedback!
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You are very welcome! Really enjoyed reading this piece!
Comment from Bill Pinder
I enjoyed reading this type of poetry, which is new to me. I'm sure you enjoy writing as you watch your grandchild. Thanks for sharing this and enjoy your summer! Bill
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I enjoyed reading this type of poetry, which is new to me. I'm sure you enjoy writing as you watch your grandchild. Thanks for sharing this and enjoy your summer! Bill
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Glad you enjoyed this piece! Thanks for the encouraging feedback.
Comment from rspoet
You've written and excellent tyburn poem and entry for the contest
The syllables are exact and the form is very well done.
Looks like summer will be a lot of fun!
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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You've written and excellent tyburn poem and entry for the contest
The syllables are exact and the form is very well done.
Looks like summer will be a lot of fun!
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this short fun piece!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cute Tyburn poem filled with fun days with your child and there is a sense of peace and tranquility in your words, much enjoyed, luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This is a cute Tyburn poem filled with fun days with your child and there is a sense of peace and tranquility in your words, much enjoyed, luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Tyburns can difficult - as they don't often make sense. Glad you enjoyed this short piece, Dolly.
