The Storm Within.
poem about storms5 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
CIAO Tempeste: I know that you are brave. But I never thought that you are tough...for a girl that is. I call a girl like you, "Hard Candy." When I was a kid in the candy store, hard candy was my favorite. And guess what. It's still my favorite today. Thank you for sharing your thrilling days of your yesteryear. "My ribs, arm, and my leg bleeding...an ambulance I won't be needing. I'm okay, momma, a Band Aid...a plop of iodine, a smooch on my cheek...and I'll be fine." Ha ha ha...that's my girl. God bless you, Tempeste. Ciao, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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CIAO Tempeste: I know that you are brave. But I never thought that you are tough...for a girl that is. I call a girl like you, "Hard Candy." When I was a kid in the candy store, hard candy was my favorite. And guess what. It's still my favorite today. Thank you for sharing your thrilling days of your yesteryear. "My ribs, arm, and my leg bleeding...an ambulance I won't be needing. I'm okay, momma, a Band Aid...a plop of iodine, a smooch on my cheek...and I'll be fine." Ha ha ha...that's my girl. God bless you, Tempeste. Ciao, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
Comment from Liberty Justice
WOW What an interesting story but so dangerous on such busy highways. You were so wild and blessed you didn't get smashed. Suspenseful story. Read Review mine also.lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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WOW What an interesting story but so dangerous on such busy highways. You were so wild and blessed you didn't get smashed. Suspenseful story. Read Review mine also.lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I'll be honest at the time I didn't worry about getting hurt ..it was all about the adrenaline rush .. Seeing those huge truck wheels (eye level)passing by.... The drivers hooting their disapproval..
Often I took my father's bike ..at least both his brakes worked.
On mine I used to use my feet and the one brake in use to stop.
Best time of my life ..
The same highway is a lot quieter since they built a new elevated highway on the mount behind the lake..
Glad you liked the poem ..
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What do you do now tempeste.
Are you a storm tornado chaser?
lolol liberty justice
Comment from LyndaS
I loved this. It is very well written and so descriptive. You hold the reader's attention with the excellent flow of this. Love the formatting and art you chose to go with it. Author notes also good. CLEARLY the best post in this contest. I wish you good luck in the vote. Lynda
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I loved this. It is very well written and so descriptive. You hold the reader's attention with the excellent flow of this. Love the formatting and art you chose to go with it. Author notes also good. CLEARLY the best post in this contest. I wish you good luck in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Ciao Lynda !
Thank you so much for the enthusiastic review and the six star vote ....I'm glad that the poem made such a good impression on you.
Out of the blue , I started thinking in rhyme at the end of last July ...and I haven't stopped since .. It's like a drug ( biggrin).
I wish you a peaceful Sunday !
Ps. The picture is of Lake Maggiore (North of Italy )during a thunder storm .
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You are most welcome. Killer post. After the contest I will message you to find out more about your corner of the world. I live in Florida USA. Keep writing!
Looking forward to talking with you
Ciao !
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
When there is storm within, man makes such mistake, being unattended and careless at the situation, though somehow accident was passed luckily; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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When there is storm within, man makes such mistake, being unattended and careless at the situation, though somehow accident was passed luckily; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-May-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Is this what they can storm chasing? In America they have some terrible storms and the worst one I have seen is in Spain once when the water was literally running down the city streets, riding a bike in the rain must have been most exhilarating as well as terrifying, you captured the scene in your words here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Is this what they can storm chasing? In America they have some terrible storms and the worst one I have seen is in Spain once when the water was literally running down the city streets, riding a bike in the rain must have been most exhilarating as well as terrifying, you captured the scene in your words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Maybe if I had not been trapped in a boarding school from age 6and 1/2 to 21 I might have been different but ️come the Summer holidays I just loved racing with my bike specially in stormy weather...and there are a lot towards the end of August going into September.
It was emotionally exciting and when you're young you do wild things without thinking you can get hurt.
I have no idea how the weather was in the 70/80s back then in America.
Due to climate change I do believe storms now reach a more violent level in the last 20 /25years in your country.
In the last 10 years there has been a big change in the weather in my region too
..but in my youth /adolescent days stormy weather was not a bad thing because its force was contained and despite the thunder-lightening and rainfall no really damage occurred.
