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Woast Wabbit

Ghost Poem contest entry

24 total reviews 
Comment from Mr.write_4u
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Unbelievable. This is too funny. Of course there's writing talent, but the cleverness and creativity and humor is outstanding. Finally, Bugs met his demise, but took that maroon with him. Thanks for sharing.
happy writing,
Larry

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Wow, thank you for the excellent review and for digging into my portfolio to find this gem. A lot of work actually went into the piece and the artwork. It's not an easy task to write a story in Elmer. Haha. I really appreciate the great review and generous stars, Larry. I'm glad you liked my little tale of Bugs and his maroon. Thanks again. Have a great night, friend.

    Ron
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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Funny Elmer Fudd dialect verse with a revenge can be so sweet theme, followed by a twist that leaves revenge hanging out to dry, perhaps permanently this time around. My favorite image was "I wecognized the smoky ears." Although, since it was spelled "smokey," I was also thinking of the Great Smoky Mountains and a backwoods dialect. So, so funny. I bet even teenagers and children would wuv, wuv, wuv this poem!

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2019
    Lol. I had a riot writing this one. It's actually not too easy writing Elmer Fudd style. It took a lot of work. Plus I also created the picture from different Google Image searches. Thank you for checking out the portfolio and for the excellent review, Crystie. I'm glad you liked my silly works. Have a wonderful night.

    Ron
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I found this a bit difficult to read but I loved the idea and I wish you luck with the contest, a very inventive and well thought out poem, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Dolly.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

SIX STARS 6******WOW What an amazing, humorous and amusing poem. You are such a clever writer with way you crafted words and how you produced glowing sounds. Your photo is so dynamic and funny. WELL DONE. I gave you my thumbs up and you hold No. 1 spot. Review Read more mine. lolol liberty justice

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and the giant sixer, Liberty Justice. I'll be sure to do that. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love this poem. You did a wonderful job and deserve a ten star for creativity but zi can only give you six.

Well done and the best of luck in the competition.

John

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and the big sixer, John. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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Oh, my gosh. Truly exceptional, and I don't know how you did it, but you definitely pulled off Elmer Fudd's pronunciation.
As for the picture? Just as awesome. You have great talent in both drawing and writing.
I wish you the very, very best in the contest :)

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Gale. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked my silly offering. The picture wasn't drawn by me. I just took different Google images pics and used an art program to make it look the way it does. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend. Thank you again.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Excellent
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Oh yeah, this is fabulous! I love everything about this! This is so cute, clever, and very well thought out. To me, this is a winner and really enjoyed this! Well done!

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review, Jeffrey. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from aryr
Excellent
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Very creative and entertaining. I found myself doing the Elmer Fudd voice in my mind while reading. You did a great job and it was a fantastic picture as well.

 Comment Written 25-May-2019


reply by the author on 26-May-2019
    Thank you for the great review, aryr. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
reply by aryr on 26-May-2019
    you are very welcome
Comment from Kismetswriter
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Bugs Bunny no longer in this world is a wonderful concept except for the fact he poison Elmer.... However still a very good poem

 Comment Written 24-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thank you for the great review and the big sixer, KW. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from jenintorre
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is brilliant, very clever and funny. I loved reading it and am sure it will be winner. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen

 Comment Written 24-May-2019


reply by the author on 24-May-2019
    Thank you for the excellent review and the giant sixer, Jen. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again.