We Knew
Love explained27 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
Congratulations on your win with this gentle poem of married love.
What have we for guidance and comfort in the dark confusion of the world but the bright rays of Love's lantern, glowing in the night?
May your beloved wife rest in peace. Love endures.
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Congratulations on your win with this gentle poem of married love.
What have we for guidance and comfort in the dark confusion of the world but the bright rays of Love's lantern, glowing in the night?
May your beloved wife rest in peace. Love endures.
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks much for your kind words Julia. I was blessed to have her for 60+ years. Thanks too, for the five stars.
Comment from Mrs. KT
A beautiful and poignant rendering, Willie.
I am sorry for your loss.
My husband and I will be married 40 years this month. We share the same kind of tenderness you express in your well-crafted verse.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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A beautiful and poignant rendering, Willie.
I am sorry for your loss.
My husband and I will be married 40 years this month. We share the same kind of tenderness you express in your well-crafted verse.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Diane, congratulations on your 40 years, in this day and time that is
a landmark. Thank you for the five stars.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely poem and congratulations in winning the contest. These types of tender moments are very special to couples who spend a lifetime together. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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This is a lovely poem and congratulations in winning the contest. These types of tender moments are very special to couples who spend a lifetime together. Marilyn
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you Marilyn for the kind review an five stars.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a sweet and precious poem, but it does not meet the contest requirements. Lines 12 and 16 do not rhyme. I would suggest a quick edit?? Good luck!
Okay - I went back and looked at the other entries - I'm just confused about the requirements. Never mind. Good luck anyway!!
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a sweet and precious poem, but it does not meet the contest requirements. Lines 12 and 16 do not rhyme. I would suggest a quick edit?? Good luck!
Okay - I went back and looked at the other entries - I'm just confused about the requirements. Never mind. Good luck anyway!!
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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Thank you for your very kind review. "Knew" was written for a beautiful and wonderful lady.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
There is nothing that compares with true love and truly she has been successful in conveying that knowledge and her feelings for her own true love. A blessed gift of love left for you to cherish always. Good luck.
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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There is nothing that compares with true love and truly she has been successful in conveying that knowledge and her feelings for her own true love. A blessed gift of love left for you to cherish always. Good luck.
Comment Written 28-May-2019
reply by the author on 29-May-2019
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I am humbled. Thank you so much for the six stars and kind words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You woke up, visualized your wife glanced at you sleeping beside you, you shared love speechless, again you slept peacefully; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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You woke up, visualized your wife glanced at you sleeping beside you, you shared love speechless, again you slept peacefully; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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I had an exceptional wife for 60 years. Go truly blessed me.
Comment from RodG
The Speaker describes a heart full of love as he sees his sleeping wife. I like how your camera records his gentle actions and her response. Truly a love poem anyone who's been in a long-term relationship can relate to.
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reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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The Speaker describes a heart full of love as he sees his sleeping wife. I like how your camera records his gentle actions and her response. Truly a love poem anyone who's been in a long-term relationship can relate to.
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Comment Written 19-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks, God blessed me with 60+ Years with my high school sweetheart.
I,m still blessed knowing she was mine. Sounds like another poem, huh?
