What Say You?
Antonym Poem Contest48 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, chip. The presentation is super--the color scheme, the picture, and the formatting of your words. All work together to create a great poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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I enjoyed your contest entry, chip. The presentation is super--the color scheme, the picture, and the formatting of your words. All work together to create a great poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you, Jan!
Comment from karenina
Good example of the synonym poetry prompt! I imagine every defendant must feel this way...talk about a crap shoot! I can not get three grandchildren to agree on a dessert! Twelve strangers with my freedom to decide? Scary!--Karenina
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Good example of the synonym poetry prompt! I imagine every defendant must feel this way...talk about a crap shoot! I can not get three grandchildren to agree on a dessert! Twelve strangers with my freedom to decide? Scary!--Karenina
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you!
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Welcome!--Karenina
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"What Say You?", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven between each word of this talented poet's work are the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six, but sadly I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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"What Say You?", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Woven between each word of this talented poet's work are the golden threads of truth. To me, this is definitely a six, but sadly I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 18-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thank you, Duchess!
Chip Kuzborski, as always, you're very welcome.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess :))) :)))
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Great picture! loved the format. interesting subject matter. I found no mistakes and enjoyed your poem.Good luck in the contest I think you are gonna do great.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Great picture! loved the format. interesting subject matter. I found no mistakes and enjoyed your poem.Good luck in the contest I think you are gonna do great.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks, Blue!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Good use of your selected illustration to amplify your four line poem. Innocent and guilty were good antonyms to use. Not sure if the jury's look is the best indicator of the defendant's guilt or not (-:
My guess this may have been a scene from an old movie still, but without notes I am unsure.
Thanks anyway for your verse.
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Good use of your selected illustration to amplify your four line poem. Innocent and guilty were good antonyms to use. Not sure if the jury's look is the best indicator of the defendant's guilt or not (-:
My guess this may have been a scene from an old movie still, but without notes I am unsure.
Thanks anyway for your verse.
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks, Mark. I need to be more diligent with notes. It's an actual courtroom scene, but I have no additional details other than that fact and that it's in the public domain.
Comment from godlucifer
justice is serve,justice is proclaim,and justice is innocent till proven guilty. your poem was serve with a purpose and that purpose was the creativity of your talent. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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justice is serve,justice is proclaim,and justice is innocent till proven guilty. your poem was serve with a purpose and that purpose was the creativity of your talent. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 19-May-2019
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Thanks again, godlucifer.
Comment from Wabigoon
Chip--
I like this and I think I understand it, but why it needs to be just four lines I don't know. The rules here are so...you name it. Short poems, as you may note are not my thing. Thanks though, I think you make your point well.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Chip--
I like this and I think I understand it, but why it needs to be just four lines I don't know. The rules here are so...you name it. Short poems, as you may note are not my thing. Thanks though, I think you make your point well.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thanks, Jeff. With my attention span, I like the short ones!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Nicely done. The poem follows format and tells a story. It is very easy to understand. I am not that familiar with the styles of poetry but I am learning through the descriptions.
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Nicely done. The poem follows format and tells a story. It is very easy to understand. I am not that familiar with the styles of poetry but I am learning through the descriptions.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you, Sandra!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of poetry in the form of "Antonym Poem" meeting the desired norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Smooth and captivating flow having impressive phraseology.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of poetry in the form of "Antonym Poem" meeting the desired norms, and transparently depicting its theme.
Smooth and captivating flow having impressive phraseology.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thanks for the kind words and generous review, RP!
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Chip Kuzborski, Welcome!
Wish you a pleasant weekend,
~ RP
Comment from Tina Crute
This seems like a technically difficult form to compose, and have it have a very dramatic impression on the reader, but you have done it. This is a great entry for the contest in my opinion and I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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This seems like a technically difficult form to compose, and have it have a very dramatic impression on the reader, but you have done it. This is a great entry for the contest in my opinion and I wish you luck!
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you, Tina!
