The Visitor
Always find a silver lining32 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very funny little poem and a great entry for the competition. It has perfect rhyme and rhythm and suits the category well. Good luck and best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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This is a very funny little poem and a great entry for the competition. It has perfect rhyme and rhythm and suits the category well. Good luck and best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 17-May-2019
reply by the author on 17-May-2019
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Thank you, Jen, for both the nice review and the well-wishes for the contest.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Absolutely perfect! I think there would be no need for fights at all! Both would just live in perfect bliss.
Very well done for the contest, Contestant. My very best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Absolutely perfect! I think there would be no need for fights at all! Both would just live in perfect bliss.
Very well done for the contest, Contestant. My very best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for those well-wishes, Sandra. I appreciate them very much.
Comment from Tina Crute
I like how you said your aunts heart stayed intact. That sets the tone for being able to have humor and find true love or happiness. This is such a positive and funny poem with a message that we can decide to be joyous in a difficult situation. Well done :-)
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I like how you said your aunts heart stayed intact. That sets the tone for being able to have humor and find true love or happiness. This is such a positive and funny poem with a message that we can decide to be joyous in a difficult situation. Well done :-)
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Exactly!! Attitude is everything. Thanks for the nice review, Tina.
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Welcome! Its memorable!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having perfectly matching the theme phraseology, and transparently depicting its theme.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last stanza, and the last two lines are particularly noteworthy:
"..."I think I've found True Love, " Auntie said.
"All our fights would be in vain!"
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having perfectly matching the theme phraseology, and transparently depicting its theme.
Smooth and enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last stanza, and the last two lines are particularly noteworthy:
"..."I think I've found True Love, " Auntie said.
"All our fights would be in vain!"
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you, RP Saxena!
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R. Allen, Most Welcome!
Have a pleasant weekend,
~ RP
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHA --- oh dear, all their fights might be in vain, but so would a lot of other things. (I agree with your notes too -- there's no better way to overcome problems, whether illness or disability. Laughter truly is wonderful medicine.)
Good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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HAHAHAHA --- oh dear, all their fights might be in vain, but so would a lot of other things. (I agree with your notes too -- there's no better way to overcome problems, whether illness or disability. Laughter truly is wonderful medicine.)
Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I'm glad we see eye to eye on this, Dawn. (I tried, but I just couldn't help myself...)
Comment from Ben Colder
No doubt poet, no doubt. See no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil, all rapped up in one. Thanks for sharing. I hope you the best in the contest, I s-ee nothing wrong.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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No doubt poet, no doubt. See no evil, hear no evil, speak no evil, all rapped up in one. Thanks for sharing. I hope you the best in the contest, I s-ee nothing wrong.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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You SEE nothing wrong. Hahahaaha. Good one, Ben. I SEE what you did there!! Great review. Thank you.
Comment from WryWriter
A very amusing poetic work. I guess you could say no one can ever predict how, where or when true love will strike. LOL! Great job on this one! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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A very amusing poetic work. I guess you could say no one can ever predict how, where or when true love will strike. LOL! Great job on this one! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I appreciate your review very much.
Comment from Beri Bee
This is so sweet! Talk about looking on the bright side! I think you've written a charming poem based on imagining certain circumstances that might be! (Or else, possibly, your lovely aunt!)
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This is so sweet! Talk about looking on the bright side! I think you've written a charming poem based on imagining certain circumstances that might be! (Or else, possibly, your lovely aunt!)
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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It was an honest-to-gawd true story about my aunt. She was very funny and upbeat.
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Oh my gosh! That's amazing!
Comment from royowen
It sounds like she not only found true love, but indeed found true wisdom, "hear no evil, see no evil, speak no evil" takes on a new lustre and meaning. Well done, a great post, a very fun -sharing one indeed. Written in very clever rhyming quatrains and ballad style abcb. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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It sounds like she not only found true love, but indeed found true wisdom, "hear no evil, see no evil, speak no evil" takes on a new lustre and meaning. Well done, a great post, a very fun -sharing one indeed. Written in very clever rhyming quatrains and ballad style abcb. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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HAHAHAHAHAAH!!! I never thought of it that way, but you sure are right! Thanks for the fun review!
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Most welcome
Comment from Boogienights
This is wonderful. Humor always makes something negative into something that lightens the mood. This is so creative and a great story. I love how nicely it rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This is wonderful. Humor always makes something negative into something that lightens the mood. This is so creative and a great story. I love how nicely it rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Yes, humor gets us through everything in life! Thanks for this validating view and the well-wishes for the contest. I appreciate both.
