Comment from heavenempress

Excellent

hi, nice piece of poetry. I liked the rich vocabulary and good English command. Very attractive image and presentation. Gifted in writing prompt, few meaningful words. I highly recommend your work to others.

 Comment Written 14-May-2019

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reply by the author on 14-May-2019

Thanks so very much!! You have made my day!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

Oh, this is lovely!! I wonder if, like here, you've been experiencing day after day (after day) of this lately! But you found a way to make it beautiful. (And I love the picture you found to accentuate it, too.) Very nicely done, Mystery Poet! Good luck in the contest! xo

 Comment Written 14-May-2019

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reply by the author on 14-May-2019

Thanks so much, Rachelle!!

reply by Rachelle Allen on 14-May-2019

You are very welcome! xo

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image.
-The syllable count is
good, and the imagery
is effective: "vibrant satin petals"
-The first line establishes
a quite, peaceful tone and mood.
-The concluding line is
satori like and very effective.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-May-2019

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reply by the author on 13-May-2019

Thanks so much, Pam.

reply by the author on 13-May-2019

Thanks so much, Pam.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-May-2019

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent imagery of the rain spotted petals
and a nice touch of alliteration.
Wonderful photograph to match your words
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert.

 Comment Written 13-May-2019

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reply by the author on 13-May-2019

Thank you, Robert.