gift of sight.
A poem3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
This is wonderful! I feel it is a very strong contender for top spot. It flows so well, so naturally, and it's got a lovely combination of gentleness, curiosity, poignancy, compassion and originality.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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This is wonderful! I feel it is a very strong contender for top spot. It flows so well, so naturally, and it's got a lovely combination of gentleness, curiosity, poignancy, compassion and originality.
Comment Written 14-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review LisaMay, it was fun to write. Cheers, j
Comment from rspoet
You've written and excellent poem on the topic of blindness
with very good insight into the reality of the senses.
Excellent meter and rhymes and interesting art work to match.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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You've written and excellent poem on the topic of blindness
with very good insight into the reality of the senses.
Excellent meter and rhymes and interesting art work to match.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks for the encouraging review Robert. We humans adapt quite well, regardless, cheers.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Gift of Sight, will be deeply felt by all who know how indispensable our vision is to us. Those who must live without seem capable and make me wish I could be so balanced even with my sight.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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This poem, Gift of Sight, will be deeply felt by all who know how indispensable our vision is to us. Those who must live without seem capable and make me wish I could be so balanced even with my sight.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Thanks for the insightful review Bill. Yes, we humans adapt well to situations like loss of sight and limbs. I thank God every day for my well~being, cheers.
