Tentative Tango
Lune poem contest (5-3-5)22 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
These words are so true. Good and bad are always around us. The picture is a good illustration of the words. The woman being the blessings and her dance partner the curses.
Congrats on placing third in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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These words are so true. Good and bad are always around us. The picture is a good illustration of the words. The woman being the blessings and her dance partner the curses.
Congrats on placing third in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you, dragonpoet!
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My pleasure, Chip.
dragon
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a clever play on words, striking in verse and imagery. To me, it captures the essence of the poet's illustrative imagination. It complies perfectly with the prompt, and I wish you best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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In my opinion, a clever play on words, striking in verse and imagery. To me, it captures the essence of the poet's illustrative imagination. It complies perfectly with the prompt, and I wish you best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you, Eve!
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You're very welcome, Chip...Eve
Comment from June Sargent
This is so true. The dance of life is very precarious as we are surrounded by both good and evil. And depending upon which direction we choose to move in, results can be positive or negative. Very perceptive piece. Well done.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This is so true. The dance of life is very precarious as we are surrounded by both good and evil. And depending upon which direction we choose to move in, results can be positive or negative. Very perceptive piece. Well done.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanks, June.
Comment from Beri Bee
This is a powerful one and beautifully balanced. It even looks good on the page. Arm in Arm. Dancing is a nice choice too. So many types of images to be dancing around!
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This is a powerful one and beautifully balanced. It even looks good on the page. Arm in Arm. Dancing is a nice choice too. So many types of images to be dancing around!
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you, Beri!
Comment from Lance S. Loria
I really like this Lune so much. Well written. Very complimentary photo artwork. Good syllable counts. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I really like this Lune so much. Well written. Very complimentary photo artwork. Good syllable counts. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanks, Lance!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this profound
poetic statement about the polar opposites in life--and they can occur
simultaneously! GREAT!
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables in this profound
poetic statement about the polar opposites in life--and they can occur
simultaneously! GREAT!
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thank you, Janice!
Comment from Eric M McChesney
A thrilling look at the dangers we all face when we dance with danger, dance with the dark side. This was a great piece that showed both sides and how each side can benefit if we work side by side instead of against each other.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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A thrilling look at the dangers we all face when we dance with danger, dance with the dark side. This was a great piece that showed both sides and how each side can benefit if we work side by side instead of against each other.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks, Eric!
Comment from misscookie
I tell you if the artwork didn't open your eyes,or powerful words don't do the trip you need help and quick
You captured m attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought write
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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I tell you if the artwork didn't open your eyes,or powerful words don't do the trip you need help and quick
You captured m attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought write
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Many thanks, Cookie!
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Your welcome
take care
Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune poem about the intense tango dance that feels like the dancers bring blessings and curses to those around them watching this dancers.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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A very well-written Lune poem about the intense tango dance that feels like the dancers bring blessings and curses to those around them watching this dancers.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks, Sandra!
Comment from LisaMay
No wonder she's tentative. If something like that evil-looking creature wanted to dance with me I'd prefer to be a wallflower and sit it out. You have chosen a wonderful image to go with this excellent lune (it even has the moon in it, so it's worth a 6 but sorry used up.)
Your poem covers the idea of the opposites/contrasts of life, dancing tantalisingly around us or dogging our steps, waiting to hurt or harm.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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No wonder she's tentative. If something like that evil-looking creature wanted to dance with me I'd prefer to be a wallflower and sit it out. You have chosen a wonderful image to go with this excellent lune (it even has the moon in it, so it's worth a 6 but sorry used up.)
Your poem covers the idea of the opposites/contrasts of life, dancing tantalisingly around us or dogging our steps, waiting to hurt or harm.
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Thanks!
