~ Fulfillment ~
Six Word Poem17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem. Sometimes we need to spice up our lives ourselves to not be bored to death. The smallest change we do around us is like a holiday.
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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A very well-written six-word poem. Sometimes we need to spice up our lives ourselves to not be bored to death. The smallest change we do around us is like a holiday.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Sandra, for your thoughtful review. ~DD
Comment from rama devi
Good advice, well voiced and finely presented. I like the consonance and alliteration of L in the opening lines and your use of bold to accentuate the word filled, though I would have considered the word FULL a bit more fitting. Then I rethought and realized filled has a deeper meaning as it implies removing the emptiness so many harbor within. So your poem got me thinking. Well done! Good luck!
Warmly, rd
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Good advice, well voiced and finely presented. I like the consonance and alliteration of L in the opening lines and your use of bold to accentuate the word filled, though I would have considered the word FULL a bit more fitting. Then I rethought and realized filled has a deeper meaning as it implies removing the emptiness so many harbor within. So your poem got me thinking. Well done! Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, RD, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
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Comment from Heather Knight
Your poem is short, but meaningful.
I always say these little ones are the most difficult to write, but you've done very well.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Your poem is short, but meaningful.
I always say these little ones are the most difficult to write, but you've done very well.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, MJG, for your welcomed review and again, sorry for my late response. ~DD
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No worries
Comment from RodG
I like your message here, but I think this would be a stronger contest entry if you told us what life should be FILLED WITH. Give your reader something positive to think about.
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reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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I like your message here, but I think this would be a stronger contest entry if you told us what life should be FILLED WITH. Give your reader something positive to think about.
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Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 07-May-2019
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Thank you for your review. Unfortunately I am unable to list all the things one can fill into life - it is only a six word poem - which is what the contest requires.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Life is fulfilled if living is filled with moral, natural and real gestures; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
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Life is fulfilled if living is filled with moral, natural and real gestures; well said, well done. Write to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, ALD, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
Comment from Sally Law
Great word for every day and for a writer, too. Our thoughts are no more than empty gestures if we do not act upon them.
A fine entry for the six word contest, DD.
Sal :+)
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Great word for every day and for a writer, too. Our thoughts are no more than empty gestures if we do not act upon them.
A fine entry for the six word contest, DD.
Sal :+)
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Sal, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated and spot on. I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
Comment from rspoet
Hello DD,
You've written an excellent six word poem for the contest
with interesting wording.
Fill your life with substance and joy will be yours.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Hello DD,
You've written an excellent six word poem for the contest
with interesting wording.
Fill your life with substance and joy will be yours.
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 14-May-2019
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Thank you, Robert, for taking the time to review my short poem. Your comments are much appreciated. I do apologize for the late response. ~DD
