Me and You 40+ years of Poems
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Comment from Willie P. Smith
I usually spend most of my time reading and reviewing rhyming poetry. However, I started reading your piece and couldn't stop until I finished. This is an excellent.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I usually spend most of my time reading and reviewing rhyming poetry. However, I started reading your piece and couldn't stop until I finished. This is an excellent.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thank you for the review, time, and compliments. Blessings to you.
Comment from moongirlwriter
I totally agree with you and I'm hoping we aren't too late to turn our existence around and know we must reach out with love and peace in our hearts if humanity is to continue. I do have a suggestion in one place of your poem, on line five. I think changing the placement of "more of importance" to "of more importance" will help it flow better and give it more power. The best of luck with this writing, it's powerful.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I totally agree with you and I'm hoping we aren't too late to turn our existence around and know we must reach out with love and peace in our hearts if humanity is to continue. I do have a suggestion in one place of your poem, on line five. I think changing the placement of "more of importance" to "of more importance" will help it flow better and give it more power. The best of luck with this writing, it's powerful.
Comment Written 07-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Great suggestion i will consider this as a revision. Thank you for the review and time.
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the way you end in imagery, it works well and creates a strong atmosphere to the poem. I also like the way you move from space between planets to space between people, very effective. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Nice poem, I enjoyed it. I like the way you end in imagery, it works well and creates a strong atmosphere to the poem. I also like the way you move from space between planets to space between people, very effective. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you for the review and encouragement, Blessings for your Time to review it.
