Assassin Nation
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Throne"A sequel to the novel Baker's Dozen
14 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ok, that made short shift of the President. lol, so what is Samantha up to? This is really good. Whatever it was that Conner told her to press when she was with the President, was a message for Sam to kill him! Job done! Now what's going to happen? :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Ok, that made short shift of the President. lol, so what is Samantha up to? This is really good. Whatever it was that Conner told her to press when she was with the President, was a message for Sam to kill him! Job done! Now what's going to happen? :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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My thought at this time were that she a total sociopath kept impulse-free through mind control. Once the cloud is lifted she acts out here homicidal bent.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Now that was a very neat murder. Will the cause ever be detectes? I wonder. Samantha seems to be aware of everything that is going on, yet
not sharing it with the President. Her killing him does not come as a surprise. Her role here is curious.
Ralf
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Now that was a very neat murder. Will the cause ever be detectes? I wonder. Samantha seems to be aware of everything that is going on, yet
not sharing it with the President. Her killing him does not come as a surprise. Her role here is curious.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Samantha is a reverse of other assassins in that she is KEPT civil.
Comment from kahpot
Wow! did not see this one coming either, I am still liking this very much and your words so well placed "disrupted bodies" before he (Manny) new whether there was any life down there yet, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Wow! did not see this one coming either, I am still liking this very much and your words so well placed "disrupted bodies" before he (Manny) new whether there was any life down there yet, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Well heck now---There certainly is a change of pace in this chapter.
I have to wonder what did she know that I don't, do I need to know and when will I find out?
Next chapter?
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Well heck now---There certainly is a change of pace in this chapter.
I have to wonder what did she know that I don't, do I need to know and when will I find out?
Next chapter?
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Shirley, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, that was the fastest, unexpected action (and I'm not talking throne stuff here) I think I've read in a while....I don't know, maybe you distracted me with the whole throne thing (eewww, by the way - lol!), but, wow!, that was fast! ;) ;) So, dead President and aid happy about the ocean... hmmmm. Thanx for sharing! ;)
**My apologies -- behind again! I actually managed to post but not anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking a break from grading this morning) and the weekend of 'moving sons' is gonna be BUSY!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great weekend yourself! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Well, that was the fastest, unexpected action (and I'm not talking throne stuff here) I think I've read in a while....I don't know, maybe you distracted me with the whole throne thing (eewww, by the way - lol!), but, wow!, that was fast! ;) ;) So, dead President and aid happy about the ocean... hmmmm. Thanx for sharing! ;)
**My apologies -- behind again! I actually managed to post but not anything else this week! :( Final exams dominated life (taking a break from grading this morning) and the weekend of 'moving sons' is gonna be BUSY!! :) :) LOL! Take good care and have a great weekend yourself! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I try to keep readers off balance.
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a pleasant read, even though I haven't read any of the preceding parts.
Here's a couple of things you might like to consider.
...where he was enjoying a Swisher Sweet while vacating a bowel. -- If it hadn't been for you image I'd have no idea what this meant. (I'm not referring to the Swisher Sweet.) Reading on, I think I'd get it, but I still think it's unclear. I think I'd use defecating.
Go ahead and press it while I finish my paperwork. -- Ha, ha. Tongue in cheek, James Bond-esque :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This is a pleasant read, even though I haven't read any of the preceding parts.
Here's a couple of things you might like to consider.
...where he was enjoying a Swisher Sweet while vacating a bowel. -- If it hadn't been for you image I'd have no idea what this meant. (I'm not referring to the Swisher Sweet.) Reading on, I think I'd get it, but I still think it's unclear. I think I'd use defecating.
Go ahead and press it while I finish my paperwork. -- Ha, ha. Tongue in cheek, James Bond-esque :)
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I see that ?evacuating a bowel? isn?t a widely used term, but for those who know it, the scene is made a bit lighter. Thanks for the observation @nd suggestion. : )
Comment from djsaxon
Way past interesting, Bill. Your usual and customary command of our crazy language, and a great result. This belongs in my "expect the unexpected" file. A commode murder? No one else could do that - DJ
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Way past interesting, Bill. Your usual and customary command of our crazy language, and a great result. This belongs in my "expect the unexpected" file. A commode murder? No one else could do that - DJ
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanks, DJ. I like to keep the reader, and myself, a little off balance.
Comment from susand3022
Hey Bill, so, they've assassinated the President. I wonder what could be next? Sounds like a coo to me! Well, I suppose I'll see... and it looks like I'll be seeing soon! Sorry I've taken so long to get back... (see Cars, and you'll see why!) See you in a few! :)
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hey Bill, so, they've assassinated the President. I wonder what could be next? Sounds like a coo to me! Well, I suppose I'll see... and it looks like I'll be seeing soon! Sorry I've taken so long to get back... (see Cars, and you'll see why!) See you in a few! :)
Comment Written 09-May-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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President is out and time for the VEEP to weigh in.
Comment from nomi338
I would say that the plot is about as thick as a bowl of pea soup. This plot is getting thicker and thicker. I am at a loss as to what might conceivably happen next. Nevertheless, I am poised to see it through to the next level.
Bring it.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I would say that the plot is about as thick as a bowl of pea soup. This plot is getting thicker and thicker. I am at a loss as to what might conceivably happen next. Nevertheless, I am poised to see it through to the next level.
Bring it.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thanks, nomi
Comment from Tpa
This item is absolutely perfect for me. I must enjoy every single aspect of the item. I must leave that particular item and feel like I would tell someone about it, think about it or refer to it with confidence later during the day. The Author has paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend this item to a friend.
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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This item is absolutely perfect for me. I must enjoy every single aspect of the item. I must leave that particular item and feel like I would tell someone about it, think about it or refer to it with confidence later during the day. The Author has paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend this item to a friend.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Thanks.
