Cliff Hanger
He makes a final decision.7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This item is absolutely perfect for you. You must enjoy every single aspect of the item. You must leave that particular item and feel like you would tell someone about it, think about it or refer to it with confidence later during the day. You have paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend this item to a friend.
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This item is absolutely perfect for you. You must enjoy every single aspect of the item. You must leave that particular item and feel like you would tell someone about it, think about it or refer to it with confidence later during the day. You have paid particular attention to the language used and the words were chosen. Every single grammar issue has been resolved and there are no spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend this item to a friend.
Cut and paste is frowned on.
Comment Written 08-May-2019
Comment from Mastery
This is okay, Tom, but for some reason it just seems rushed. Like it just came to mind or something. I am wondering so many things about the characters involved. Who is cheating on whom etc. Good try at it though, Tom Good Luck. Bob
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This is okay, Tom, but for some reason it just seems rushed. Like it just came to mind or something. I am wondering so many things about the characters involved. Who is cheating on whom etc. Good try at it though, Tom Good Luck. Bob
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The decision for survival in peace is more effective and important than any other things in point of danger; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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The decision for survival in peace is more effective and important than any other things in point of danger; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Write to inspire changes for years--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank You
Comment from poetwatch
Good cliff hanger Author. Leave the reader wanting more, to know who did what, but I can guess. Even now husband as well as wives do this to pay for unfaithfulness. This is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Good cliff hanger Author. Leave the reader wanting more, to know who did what, but I can guess. Even now husband as well as wives do this to pay for unfaithfulness. This is a good entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Enjoyed your review. THANK YOU.
Comment from Earl Corp
Hellacious twist at the end. I did not see that coming at all. I hope he gets away with it. Fifty words isn't a lot to work with but you packed a lot into it. Nice job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Hellacious twist at the end. I did not see that coming at all. I hope he gets away with it. Fifty words isn't a lot to work with but you packed a lot into it. Nice job.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the cheating wife who pleads to her husband not to take his lifemail because the other man means nothing to her, when he step back from the cliff he is ready to shoot her.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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A very well-written poem about the cheating wife who pleads to her husband not to take his lifemail because the other man means nothing to her, when he step back from the cliff he is ready to shoot her.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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thank you
Comment from moongirlwriter
OMGsh. . .this is terrible but of course, does happen. When did life become so invaluable that we feel it necessary to not only take our own life but someone else's life as well? I think as society forgets that God gave that life and only He has the right to take it away has been forgotten. Life is so worth living when we live it serving others with love and kindness. This poem breaks my heart. I also don't care for the artwork, it simply doesn't match this terrible ending. So sorry, I'm just an optimist and can't go to this place.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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OMGsh. . .this is terrible but of course, does happen. When did life become so invaluable that we feel it necessary to not only take our own life but someone else's life as well? I think as society forgets that God gave that life and only He has the right to take it away has been forgotten. Life is so worth living when we live it serving others with love and kindness. This poem breaks my heart. I also don't care for the artwork, it simply doesn't match this terrible ending. So sorry, I'm just an optimist and can't go to this place.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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thank you
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