Love of Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "The Elevator"Eclectic mix
10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Well, aren't your the clever wordsmith with this one!! :) :) I'm not sure what's funnier, your words here or that funny little guy on the right!! :) ;) **Sorry so far behind....gave up trying to catch my tail 'cuz I got too dizzy....now I'm just trying to get through the days (got to add 'family emergency to the list of life...ugh). Take care! :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
  |
Well, aren't your the clever wordsmith with this one!! :) :) I'm not sure what's funnier, your words here or that funny little guy on the right!! :) ;) **Sorry so far behind....gave up trying to catch my tail 'cuz I got too dizzy....now I'm just trying to get through the days (got to add 'family emergency to the list of life...ugh). Take care! :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
-
Yes! Thanks very much for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from frogbook
OMG, what a funny picture and a very original and witty thought for the poem to go along. One wonders about the events leading up to this, but at least now we know what the little guys are thinking. LOL.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
OMG, what a funny picture and a very original and witty thought for the poem to go along. One wonders about the events leading up to this, but at least now we know what the little guys are thinking. LOL.
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
your imagination can get you anywhere! Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is very cute. Your play on words is most clever and it brought a smile to my lips when I read it. The photo is adorable. And, the title is a great choice, with the photo showing your meaning of "The Elevator." Thanks for sharing your talent for seeing a funny story in a photo.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
This is very cute. Your play on words is most clever and it brought a smile to my lips when I read it. The photo is adorable. And, the title is a great choice, with the photo showing your meaning of "The Elevator." Thanks for sharing your talent for seeing a funny story in a photo.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
Thanks for your supportive review
Hugs, Trisha
-
You're welcome, Trisha.
Jesse
Comment from Michele Harber
What an adorable combination of picture and poem. I enjoyed the play on words of "deer" and "stag party," and the idea that the aforementioned stag is the elevator is very cute.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
What an adorable combination of picture and poem. I enjoyed the play on words of "deer" and "stag party," and the idea that the aforementioned stag is the elevator is very cute.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
I have a strange sense of humor, but if it gives smiles I?m happy! Thanks for your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
-
You're very welcome. There's nothing wrong with strange as long as it's presented well.
Comment from Sara R.
I enjoy the humor in this statement. You depicted the right words for this picture. Pictures speak and we all have our own interpretation of them.
We see things differently and at times we see things for what they really are. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
 |
I enjoy the humor in this statement. You depicted the right words for this picture. Pictures speak and we all have our own interpretation of them.
We see things differently and at times we see things for what they really are. Keep it up!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
-
You are a newbie, don?t be surprised if you get some snappy replies to your low stars. I?m sure not everyone will appreciate it
Thanks for reviewing
-
I am a newbie, you are correct. Thank you for the heads up. Your piece was great. Perhaps I didn't express it the way it deserved.
-
Thank you. Basically, some people assess reviews by the number of stars. So if you?re writing a positive review, but give it 3 stars it?s helpful to write how the penning could be improved .if you write a poor review, but give it 5 or 6 stars it?s again a confusing rating.
Welcome to my corner of FS.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the small animals in the deer's antlers. They thought they are in an elevator when he ruses, now they can't get out and they're going to miss the party.
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
A very well-written poem about the small animals in the deer's antlers. They thought they are in an elevator when he ruses, now they can't get out and they're going to miss the party.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Anne Mabley
Ha! Ha! Ha! I am very curious as to how you came up with this. Was it the picture or did you find the picture to go with your poem? This really made me smile. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
Ha! Ha! Ha! I am very curious as to how you came up with this. Was it the picture or did you find the picture to go with your poem? This really made me smile. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
I saved the picture until I thought of a caption for it. I appreciate your review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Beri Bee
I love puns so much and this is a great one! Thanks for sharing it and entertaining this reader! What came first, the picture or the poem? Well done!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
I love puns so much and this is a great one! Thanks for sharing it and entertaining this reader! What came first, the picture or the poem? Well done!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
The picture I?d saved until I thought of a caption for it. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs Trisha.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fantastic, humorous and innovative! Poet speaks about the bizarre stop of the elevator for someone is getting late for the stag party; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
Fantastic, humorous and innovative! Poet speaks about the bizarre stop of the elevator for someone is getting late for the stag party; well said, well done. Thanks4sharing. Write2Inspire Changes4Years--DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
Glad you enjoyed this one, Al. Thanks for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a genius write and a great play on words and your poem and artwork work perfectly together, much enjoyed Trisha and it made me smile, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
|
This is a genius write and a great play on words and your poem and artwork work perfectly together, much enjoyed Trisha and it made me smile, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
-
Glad you enjoyed it Dolly I appreciate your positive review
Hugs, Trisha