Without my dream
A beautiful dream.35 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Good job. Traveling a bit in your dreams. Exploring all those places. I seldom remember my dreams and often when I just fade off to sleep there will be a green-haired person talking. What's that about? Who knows? I don't examine dreams much either.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Good job. Traveling a bit in your dreams. Exploring all those places. I seldom remember my dreams and often when I just fade off to sleep there will be a green-haired person talking. What's that about? Who knows? I don't examine dreams much either.
Nice poem
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you for the stars. What's with the green haired person? Sounds interesting. Let me know, I'm nosy.
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Not sure about the green-haired person. Didn't stay in the dream long enough. Don't always remember dreams either. Sorry - that's a bit flat...
Comment from Bichon
A very well written and enjoyable poem. Dreaming is awesome, especially if you can remember your dreams like you can. Thanks for writing about your dream and sharing it.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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A very well written and enjoyable poem. Dreaming is awesome, especially if you can remember your dreams like you can. Thanks for writing about your dream and sharing it.
Comment Written 12-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Most of m dreams are enjoyable and some I can't discuss, but I occasionally have a bad one from PTSD.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Without my dream", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I looking forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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"Without my dream", is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I looking forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 11-May-2019
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Thank you for your thought of six. This is a dream I have quite often.
It varies a little bit from time to time, but it's always a pleasant dream. Thank you for your kind words.
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Thank you for your thought of six. This is a dream I have quite often.
It varies a little bit from time to time, but it's always a pleasant dream. Thank you for your kind words.
Sixes are far too rare!!
We should be given far more of them.
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from victor 66
I've had dreams where I was flying slowly over my hometown. I remember looking down at the courthouse and as well as the house where I grew up. Perhaps, we both were having ""out of body experiences". A very good poem. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I've had dreams where I was flying slowly over my hometown. I remember looking down at the courthouse and as well as the house where I grew up. Perhaps, we both were having ""out of body experiences". A very good poem. Best wishes.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you for the stars, much appreciated.
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You are most welcome, Willie.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Willie, As I was reading your poem, images began coming into my mind, then I saw your bio and I realized why the ones I had were coming... children's books! The vivid one was a little boy in pj's sitting on a rainbow under the stars... what a rainbow would be doing under the stars I have no idea, but it's a dream right? So I went with it... besides the rainbow is really pretty, all bright against the night sky... ;)
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Hi Willie, As I was reading your poem, images began coming into my mind, then I saw your bio and I realized why the ones I had were coming... children's books! The vivid one was a little boy in pj's sitting on a rainbow under the stars... what a rainbow would be doing under the stars I have no idea, but it's a dream right? So I went with it... besides the rainbow is really pretty, all bright against the night sky... ;)
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks for the five stars. One good thing about a dream, if it's a good one, there's no limit.
Comment from Heather Knight
I wish I had six stars for you. I love this poem.
It's true that dreams allow us to do many things we can't do in real life.
Just one little thing: on line four you don't need the apostrophe.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I wish I had six stars for you. I love this poem.
It's true that dreams allow us to do many things we can't do in real life.
Just one little thing: on line four you don't need the apostrophe.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you Maria for your constructive criticism and stars. What! I made a mistake. I thought I was perfect. Ha, ha
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LOL
Comment from karenina
What a charmingly enchanting write! Dreams can be ethereal like this...one whimsical scene after another...like your spirit came out to play! Loved you dangling your feet off the rainbow' s bend!--Karenina
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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What a charmingly enchanting write! Dreams can be ethereal like this...one whimsical scene after another...like your spirit came out to play! Loved you dangling your feet off the rainbow' s bend!--Karenina
Comment Written 11-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you for the stars and kind words. Both are much appreciated.
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Wishing you more sweet dreams!--Karenina
Comment from Boogienights
This poem is great. It's TRUE that your dreams can take you anywhere you want to go...I've been so many places myself, so I know. I love the imagery in your poem, it stirs the imagination. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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This poem is great. It's TRUE that your dreams can take you anywhere you want to go...I've been so many places myself, so I know. I love the imagery in your poem, it stirs the imagination. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the five stars. Glad you enjoyed my dream.
Comment from Ross E Silke
I really enjoyed this quantitive read. It's lavish and has such great harmony. It rhymes wonderfully well with an exceptional flow; something I enjoyed reading over again. It's rhythmic and disgests well and has a beautiful chime in its rhyming. A great pleasure to read and experience! Excellent structure, meter, and dynamics. I might choose to increase the font and colourize it with bold texture to help it stand out. It sounds out so amazing. I like the ideas, the pictures, and the places it takes out. It's elegant and ingenious. Captivating and smooth. A wonderful experience, breathtaking, enchanting, mesmerizing, and quite frank but worthy of an awarded six. Superb
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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I really enjoyed this quantitive read. It's lavish and has such great harmony. It rhymes wonderfully well with an exceptional flow; something I enjoyed reading over again. It's rhythmic and disgests well and has a beautiful chime in its rhyming. A great pleasure to read and experience! Excellent structure, meter, and dynamics. I might choose to increase the font and colourize it with bold texture to help it stand out. It sounds out so amazing. I like the ideas, the pictures, and the places it takes out. It's elegant and ingenious. Captivating and smooth. A wonderful experience, breathtaking, enchanting, mesmerizing, and quite frank but worthy of an awarded six. Superb
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thanks Ross, you honor me with such a great review.
Comment from royowen
A great entry in this rhyming contest, this imaginative work follows a pattern of thought that I think a lot of us have journeyed on, but never committed it to paper, I used to have day dreams as a boy of similar adventures, I was always indestructible and immortal, well done, articulate and expressive, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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A great entry in this rhyming contest, this imaginative work follows a pattern of thought that I think a lot of us have journeyed on, but never committed it to paper, I used to have day dreams as a boy of similar adventures, I was always indestructible and immortal, well done, articulate and expressive, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-May-2019
reply by the author on 10-May-2019
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Thank you for the five star review.
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Most welcome
