Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Behind Close Doors"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Firstly, I love the image which sets the scene immediately! Then your exploration beyond of the chambers of the mind: those fragmented thoughts are skilfully reflected in your intriguing verse which deserves more than one reading. Great alliteration too. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Firstly, I love the image which sets the scene immediately! Then your exploration beyond of the chambers of the mind: those fragmented thoughts are skilfully reflected in your intriguing verse which deserves more than one reading. Great alliteration too. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Glad, certain aspects in this read were found appealing to your interests; thanking you for this generous rate despite faults, and those cherished words.
Comment from royowen
I don't know what the human personality is really, we house an awful lot of complex thoughts and emotions that can't be harnessed by normal, we spend our whole lives growing up, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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I don't know what the human personality is really, we house an awful lot of complex thoughts and emotions that can't be harnessed by normal, we spend our whole lives growing up, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2023
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Yeah, quite a puzzle, created the good Lord, wonders to be alast, fulfilling the prophecy of Holy Text, by line, concept to concept. Thank you.
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Good job
Comment from LG Wolfe
Occasionally I find writing that makes me feel emotions that I can't place, understand the import without the story. This is one of those poems. Thank you for this. I'll be coming back to it many times.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Occasionally I find writing that makes me feel emotions that I can't place, understand the import without the story. This is one of those poems. Thank you for this. I'll be coming back to it many times.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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At least this write gives something to consider, failing or accepted attributes beside point, ponder simply the strings of thought applied in expressed efforts by writer. Thanking you for your generous rate, although views yet understanding perhaps its intention by me.
Comment from beizanten
an interesting beginning stanza. A pretty good second stanza. The third stanza is pretty good stanza. A very good fourth stanza. You done pretty great, keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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an interesting beginning stanza. A pretty good second stanza. The third stanza is pretty good stanza. A very good fourth stanza. You done pretty great, keep up the great work!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Trying to improve, appreciating comments of encouragement such as yours, feeling a closen of gaps to a better conveyance by me. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Earl Corp
I like the analogy you made that all our emotions and personality traits being a room in our minds. This is probably as good of an explanation as there is.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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I like the analogy you made that all our emotions and personality traits being a room in our minds. This is probably as good of an explanation as there is.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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The mind holds many values, as unknown wonders to be yet disclosed about us, glad certain aspect in this particular write were captivating to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Randa Dayle
Very interesting poem. We all have different personalities, and who your reality may or may not be mine. Thanks for sharing. Please continue to do so!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Very interesting poem. We all have different personalities, and who your reality may or may not be mine. Thanks for sharing. Please continue to do so!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2019
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Glad aspects in this particular write were captivating to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought provoking poem. We keep most of our thoughts hidden in our minds where no one else is allowed to go unless we open the door to go in.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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A very well-written thought provoking poem. We keep most of our thoughts hidden in our minds where no one else is allowed to go unless we open the door to go in.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Well, given comment assures at least this write was found comprehensive, allowing you at least to understand in some clarity stated view. Or, we both are crossed visioned. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed comments.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good write, TPAC. It was really powerful and the imagery in it was done well. The flow was good and the meaning of the poem comes through. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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This was a good write, TPAC. It was really powerful and the imagery in it was done well. The flow was good and the meaning of the poem comes through. Good job.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Strong points made are the pits of my writes, thanking reviewers, as self, given revisions are correcting those flaws in my works. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Behind closed doors, one's personality remains; there are different sides of personality, as it comes out in moments of angers, and problems; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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Behind closed doors, one's personality remains; there are different sides of personality, as it comes out in moments of angers, and problems; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 21-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2019
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I am learning, feeling more confident about my writes, doing the proper expressions. Thanking you for your generous rate, support, confining trust.
