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Chem Trails in the Sky

The skies are streaked with chem trails and it's okay?

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Comment from June Sargent
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This is certainly a timely subject when we see the results of global warming. Glaciers are melting. Coral reefs are dying. There has to be a connection. But no one wants to talk about it. Thanks for sharing this reminder.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    I know that some of this golbal warming is just a natural cycle of our planet but how much can be contributed to the chem trails. . .they are present from one end of our country to the other and I think they are in Europe as well. Veru scary. Thanks for your comments and stars.
Comment from Spitfire
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Not a good thing according to my sources-- those who deal with the unseen. The government adds something to the fuel that goes into planes. To what purpose, I don't know.

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    yes, it's all very disturbing. Streaks across our skies from Washington to NYC and not a word about why. I fear we are being used as guinnie pigs. Thanks for your comments and the stars.
Comment from Richard J
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A great picture choice, Dear Poetess,
Your presentation is neat and appealing to the reader's mind's-eye, and the poem, itself, with rhyme and near rhyme flows nicely from beginning to end.
An excellent way to keep us all in the loop, not forgetting the way air pollution, also, becomes land, flora, and fauna's demise.
I, very much, like your style, and the contest voters should, too.

Thank you for the enjoyment, and for the points and cents ... hugs 'n smiles! Richard : )

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    :) Thank you for the comments and the stars!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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I guess I don't even notice them here in FL. We have so many clouds they must cover them up. When a kid living on the desert there were few clouds and many jets passed over and I did notice them, and all the sonic booms. It never even occurred to me they could be causing pollution. ={ The poem is well done and informative. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    Thank you so much. Thanks for the comments and the stars.
Comment from susand3022
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Hello Moongirl writer! I really like this 3-6-9 poem very much, it's truly thought-provoking, which not all poems are. I did want to call to your attention that your last line in your last stanza isn't 9 though, it's 10 syllables. Oops! I think if you leave out the word "fine" (which is largely understood in the word 'particles' anyway) you will be all set!
The progression is really smooth as well. I like the way it goes from broad to more specific from stanza to stanza. Very well done. :)

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    Thanks for the correction. . .I even put fine in there for word count. Boy was I feeling the lateness of the hour. These chem trails make me very concerned about how they might be contributing to our weather patterns. . .so scary. Thanks for your comments and the stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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We never know what we are breathing in from the atmosphere do we? Lots of rubbish falls from the skies and pollutes our air, a fine trio here, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    Thank you Dolly. I agree and it's a little scary for me.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Chemical trails in the sky, scientists claim it is all about climate change, but no action by government, who and how to save our planet; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    I look at our climate changes. . .and say no thank you or tell me why we need all these chemicals in our skies. Thanks for your comments and stars. :)
Comment from Maria Millsaps
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Hello, just want to say I found your 3-6-9 poem to be very intriguing and a strong statement on the silence from our voted officials. Nice crafted, strong and to the point.

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 Comment Written 20-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
    I look at our climate changes and say no thank you or tell me why we need all these chemicals in our skies. Thanks for your comments and stars. :)