Mirrors, Reflection or Refractio
Any reason I can't finish my title?64 total reviews
Comment from Janilou
I'm good
at puzzles
Not so much
with glue...
or you
Snow
comes down
so politely
Covers me
When I just can't
Paint
another portrait
Such vivid word paintings here, I think you have in fact painted that portrait. It's a good poem. The emotion is palpable. I found no errors in your work.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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I'm good
at puzzles
Not so much
with glue...
or you
Snow
comes down
so politely
Covers me
When I just can't
Paint
another portrait
Such vivid word paintings here, I think you have in fact painted that portrait. It's a good poem. The emotion is palpable. I found no errors in your work.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
The puzzles of our yesterdays seem even more confusing the longer they lie there on the floor --- leave them.. don't try to figure them out... don't try to figure out the other... Bring on the snow - let it wash away the littered rain and the other 'til no glue is necessary. There, now, the snow's gone and it's time to paint a new portrait. :) ;) This is an AWESOME write, Victor, and I'm so glad I ran across it today... gotta say, too, that's a cool pic to accompany it! :) ;) Thanx for sharing, sir! :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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The puzzles of our yesterdays seem even more confusing the longer they lie there on the floor --- leave them.. don't try to figure them out... don't try to figure out the other... Bring on the snow - let it wash away the littered rain and the other 'til no glue is necessary. There, now, the snow's gone and it's time to paint a new portrait. :) ;) This is an AWESOME write, Victor, and I'm so glad I ran across it today... gotta say, too, that's a cool pic to accompany it! :) ;) Thanx for sharing, sir! :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Wonderful review, Yvette. Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
The poet speaks of weariness. Strong wording I fine an the poem holds me for the final. I find no fault and congratulate the writer for a job well done.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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The poet speaks of weariness. Strong wording I fine an the poem holds me for the final. I find no fault and congratulate the writer for a job well done.
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Ben.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Victor,
Oooh, a very thought provoking piece you have crafted, Victor. It is very well written with nothing for me to suggest improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Hi Victor,
Oooh, a very thought provoking piece you have crafted, Victor. It is very well written with nothing for me to suggest improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
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Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
