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Crystal Jail. Part II

Happy ending...

12 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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What a wonderful fairy tale, Maria -- necromancer and all! ;) ;) Yes, we should all allow our children to ride the merry go round when their young and let them build up slowly to the heart stopping roller coaster! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thanks again for reading, Yvette.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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I'm pleased to read that the young couple did, indeed have great trials to overcome--he had to find a way to enlist the queen's help and she had to overcome her father's fear and objections. I'm glad they got their happy ending!

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Brenda.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 16-Apr-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Judy Swanson
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Enchanting. All the good stuff of fairy tales! Well written and will bring delight to children - as well as adults! How wise was the wife - sending such a private and clear message that would both stymie and delight the king. Well done.

Judy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much for reading, Judy.
Comment from robyn corum
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MJ,

Very nice. I'm glad the couple found a way to be together. This was a nice solution to the problem without having to try to raise the dead. Great solution. Thanks!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thank YOU for reading.
Comment from JudyE
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I'm glad there was a happy ending to this tale. Isn't 'necromancer' a great word? You don't see it used too often. Thanks for an interesting story. Cheers. Judy

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Yes, it's a cool word.
    Thanks for reading.
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Maria,

I love your stories--all of them. This one is so imaginative, yet realistic in the sense that a gifted medium could definitely receive a message. Very nicely done. Thanks for a delightful read. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks so much for reading and for the generous rating, Jan.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Aw that was lovely, and in true fairy tale style, the princess and Josh lived happily ever after! I loved it. I liked how Josh went all that way to try and bring the King's dead wife back, but found that to be impossible, but did get to give the King a message from her. Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Sandra. Take care.
Comment from royowen
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Well done with this one Maria. A happy ending indeed! The young princess stood her ground Beautfully and the young proved his love for the girl by trying to fulfil the King's request...an succeeded. Well done, good episodal work. blessings, Roy
Typo : "Why I am here?" "Why am I here?"

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading and for noticing the typo, Roy.
reply by royowen on 14-Apr-2019
    Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a very inventive and interesting story Maria and I am glad that you did not allow the queen to return, but she sent a message instead, you gave this a real human twist, a joy to read, glad it ended happily, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    Thanks for reading, Dolly. Take care.
Comment from 24chas
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What a great story, Maria. The romantic in me loved this story so much. I'm going to print it off and let my daughter read it. I know she'll love it. This is one of your best, my friend.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
    I hope she'll like it. Debra often reads my stories to her daughters and it makes me very happy.
    Thanks for reading.