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Describing Love

from a heart

16 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This is a poetic guide to a long-lived relationship. If the reader were to follow these behaviors they would gain more happiness. I always admire poets who can write such poignant material and have it fit the rules so well. This is a lovely tribute to your relationship and to all enduring relationships. This will draw the reader in to reflect upon the relationships they've had and those they may presently be in. Some may be filled with regret and others overflowing with gratitude. Well written.

 Comment Written 10-May-2019


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    thank you
Comment from pome lover
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all thoughtful and meaningful words of endearment, describing love.
Lovely thoughts and phrases,
good acrostic entry. Well done and best of luck in the contest.
pome lover

 Comment Written 10-May-2019


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    thank you
Comment from Ms. Snyder
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I'm always a sucker for anything that would be describing a connection to love and throw it into an acrostic format and I am all in! This was beautiful and you took some unique twists with going inward where other's might have forced it to rhyme or take a longer syllable connection. I liked that. I like when it is unique. A good description of love for me specifically! Cheers, Fonda

 Comment Written 10-May-2019


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    thank you
Comment from moongirlwriter
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This relationship sounds as though it will succeed and be around when you are both old and gray. If those vows you keep while allowing you each to grow through the years. This truly is a beautiful piece of two hearts being committed to love. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-May-2019


reply by the author on 09-May-2019
    Thank you kindly
reply by moongirlwriter on 09-May-2019
    :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Such a romantic and, yes, committed offering for the acrostic contest, Donette! :) ;) Love the strength in the bond that you have described! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2019


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written acrostic poem describing love to someone who needs to know. It is an honest kind of affection towards our partner that we feel can last an eternity.

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019


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    thank you kindly
Comment from HealingMuse
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Hi Donette,

This is an exceptionally well written acrostic and a great contest entry. Nothing here for me to suggest you revise. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2019
    wow thank you so much
Comment from misscookie
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, it is a perfect match
I thought you poem was very love able to read. I remember feeling those emotion.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019


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    thank you kindly
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a loving acrostic, Donette. You've focused on some important ingredients for longevity. Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019


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Comment from Tina Crute
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You have written a very lovely poem with descriptive phrases that fully represent the nature of love and loyalty and bliss. This acrostic doesn't read stiffly as some acrostics do. You have a smooth way of fulfilling the style but also getting your point across!

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2019


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2019
    thank you very much