Perpetual Sunshine
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Comment from moongirlwriter
I so love this artwork. . .nothing beats the laughter of a child. I also think the words fit this artwork perfectly. When I first read it, it instantly made me smile. Then I kept looking at it and thought more about the balance and wanted to give you my thoughts. When I think of laughter and smiling I always think that the smiles come first. . .then laughter. So then I find myself trying to rearrange your poem, sorry. I know, it has to follow the contest rules and of course it works perfectly that way, so I'll move on. :)
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I so love this artwork. . .nothing beats the laughter of a child. I also think the words fit this artwork perfectly. When I first read it, it instantly made me smile. Then I kept looking at it and thought more about the balance and wanted to give you my thoughts. When I think of laughter and smiling I always think that the smiles come first. . .then laughter. So then I find myself trying to rearrange your poem, sorry. I know, it has to follow the contest rules and of course it works perfectly that way, so I'll move on. :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Thanx for your wonderful comments.... it's okay that you tried to rearrange it 'cuz I'm the only one with the password, so try away! :) LOL! LOL! Seriously, I'm so very glad it made you smile, moongirl -- that smile of yours is worth it! ;) ;) Thank you for dropping by and have a wonderful weekend ahead! ;) ;) Yvette
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So glad you could see the humor. . .I would have felt terrible if you hadn't. :) Have a blessed Easter weekend.
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I was thinking about you mentioning that you block your work. . .first and foremost, I didn't mean I was trying to change it on your page (just in my head). I didn't even know that was possible. . .but, how rude of someone even thinking this would be appropriate. When I write a review. . .if something bothers me about the writing, I just try to think it through on how I would write it. . .nothing more. Again, I do hope you took this in the spirit intended. :)
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I'm a computer programmer/physicist/teacher -- the password thing was a JOKE. a JOKE. Sorry if it fell flat... And, yeah, there are reviewers who regularly try to 're-write' posts through their reviews, but that's just a thing with them, I guess. I don't take it seriously. Thought I made that clear in my original response. Again....a JOKE. :) :) :) :) :)
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That's what I did think at first but then when you mentioned you had blocked any entry, I second guess myself. Alls well, thanks for explaining.
Comment from artisart4u
Sounds like words of wisdom.
It is a nice poem to match the picture and your choice of font colors.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
Congratulations on your awards.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Sounds like words of wisdom.
It is a nice poem to match the picture and your choice of font colors.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
Congratulations on your awards.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Wow, AIA4u!! ;) :) Thank you for dropping by as you have certainly brightened up things around here with those lovely stars -- so much appreciated!! ;) ;) Be sure to stop by any time and sit a spell ... always something going on over here - LOL! ;) Thanx again for dropping by and for those stars! :) Have a wonderful weekend ahead! ;) :) Yvette -
Comment from dragonpoet
I like the artwork. It is so colorful and happy. It illustrates the poem well.
The poem gives good advice. If everyone followed it, maybe there would be less violence.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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I like the artwork. It is so colorful and happy. It illustrates the poem well.
The poem gives good advice. If everyone followed it, maybe there would be less violence.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 17-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2019
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Thank you, Joan, for the lovely congrats and for stopping in for the review -- so very much appreciated! ;) :) Here's sending you sunshine for a happy Friday! ;) ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette. Have a great weekend.
~Joan
Comment from Alyson Marie
This is an awesome poem.
It makes me think of the preschoolers, that I work with. A child does just that, paints with laughter. As we get older, sometimes our laughter fades. This is a great reminder to never stop smiling.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is an awesome poem.
It makes me think of the preschoolers, that I work with. A child does just that, paints with laughter. As we get older, sometimes our laughter fades. This is a great reminder to never stop smiling.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Oh, Alyson, you just put a big ray of sunshine in my day with those lovely stars -- thank you!! :) :) And I'm so glad this one touched you the way it did ... always be sure to pass along that smile to everyone and, just like your stars today for me, it'll come back right when you need it!! ;) ;) Take care and have a great remainder of the week! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Y..M. Roger;
> Great congratulations and placing in this contest's entry.
> The post is very Definitive and it seems to be the theme in this contests drawing boards the common denominator is growth and in this one the smile grows the laughter.
> Congratulations on downing your placing in this contest century and take care and have a good one.
Alx
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Cheers, Y..M. Roger;
> Great congratulations and placing in this contest's entry.
> The post is very Definitive and it seems to be the theme in this contests drawing boards the common denominator is growth and in this one the smile grows the laughter.
> Congratulations on downing your placing in this contest century and take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Hey, Alx -- thanx so much for dropping by for the review and the congrats... means a lot! :) ;) So, here's sending some paint your way to fill your coming week with smiles and laughter! :) :) Take care! :) Yvette :)
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Ha, ha, chuckle! Could use the paint, I especially like polkadot paint, but it's so hard to find. Chuckle!
Alx
Comment from F. Wehr3
What a positive and uplifting message, Yvette. Nicely done in so few words. One's countenance makes a difference. Congrats on placing in the contest.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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What a positive and uplifting message, Yvette. Nicely done in so few words. One's countenance makes a difference. Congrats on placing in the contest.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 14-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2019
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Hey, Russell! Thanx so much for stopping by for the 'congrats' sir! :) :) Means a lot that you took a moment to send a quick note -- and, I am definitely one that believes in SMILES! :) ;) Take care and have a great week! :) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, what a charming picture, doesn't it just make you smile?? Aww. Your words are just so perfect to go with it, Yvette, and it's true, paint your world with laughter, wherever you go, and you and the people around you won't fail to smile. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Oh, what a charming picture, doesn't it just make you smile?? Aww. Your words are just so perfect to go with it, Yvette, and it's true, paint your world with laughter, wherever you go, and you and the people around you won't fail to smile. Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thank you so very much for this excellent review, Sandra -- love to hear from you and see that shining smile of yours there in my review registry!! :) ;) Have a wonderful weekend, ma'am, and take care out thre! ;) :) Yvette :)
Comment from TPAC
An imaginative conveyance, filled with thought-provoking concepts about addressing daily living, suggesting proper seasoning to enhance main ingredient. All in my opinion.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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An imaginative conveyance, filled with thought-provoking concepts about addressing daily living, suggesting proper seasoning to enhance main ingredient. All in my opinion.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, TPAC -- I was having one of my really SUNSHINEY days .... I try to make them all that way even when the clouds like to try to muscle their way in! :) ;) Take care! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Jesse James Doty
The artwork is amazing. It matches your theme of this poem so well. There's nothing more special than hearing a child's laughter. I like the metaphor of "Paint" with the wonderful painting you found on Pixels. The artwork, as well as the poem, asks us to "paint" our world with laughter and "accent" it with our smile. What better way is there than to show and share, this philosophy with the world. A much better world we would be, if we, did just that. Thank you for bringing a smile to my face by my reading this piece. Have a wonderful rest of your week.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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The artwork is amazing. It matches your theme of this poem so well. There's nothing more special than hearing a child's laughter. I like the metaphor of "Paint" with the wonderful painting you found on Pixels. The artwork, as well as the poem, asks us to "paint" our world with laughter and "accent" it with our smile. What better way is there than to show and share, this philosophy with the world. A much better world we would be, if we, did just that. Thank you for bringing a smile to my face by my reading this piece. Have a wonderful rest of your week.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Oh, Jesse, always so good to hear from you sir! :) ;) This one was 'all me' with no necessary flourishes or masks -- even when the clouds try to muscle their way in, I always try to make a little sunshine happen! :) ;) Glad you enjoyed it and I cannot agree more that the world would be SO DIFFERENT if more folks tried the sunshine rather than the storm cloud approach! :) ;) Take care out there and have a great weekend! ;) ;)
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Hello Yvette
Parts of you are so complicated and yet, this poem shows so well your sunshine philosophy, in all its simplicity. No masks, all you. Thank you for being you!
Jesse
Comment from donette1914
this is so outstanding and i love this!!!
very well thought out and this piece really draws ones in,
you have a good imagination and a very good writer.
I love the artwork
I enjoyed this very much
I hope the very best in the contest
donette1914 4/10/2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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this is so outstanding and i love this!!!
very well thought out and this piece really draws ones in,
you have a good imagination and a very good writer.
I love the artwork
I enjoyed this very much
I hope the very best in the contest
donette1914 4/10/2019
Comment Written 10-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2019
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Wow, Donette!! You just lit up my review registry and my afternoon, sir!! :) ;) Thank you so very much for stopping by today and for those lovely stars -- they really mean a lot! :) ;) Let's just say I was having one of my really SUNSHINEY days when I wrote this one .... I try to make them all that way even when the clouds like to try to muscle their way in! :) ;) LOL! :) :) You take care out there, ma'am, and know that you are welcome to stop by any time --- always a spot to sit a spell 'round here! ;) :) Yvette
