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rejection is hard to take7 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Well, some revenge is best served cold, but it seems not so the case here. they seem to be a perfect match though. A couple of absolute nutters. neither has much to redeem them. lol
Well-written little piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Well, some revenge is best served cold, but it seems not so the case here. they seem to be a perfect match though. A couple of absolute nutters. neither has much to redeem them. lol
Well-written little piece.
GMG
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Mastery
Oooooh. That was harsh. Very well written, but not really plausible in my estimation. Brian would never get /Maddy into bed on the first date no matter what. but then again it was all her doing, so...who knows? LOL Good job on this flasher, Tom. Bob
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Oooooh. That was harsh. Very well written, but not really plausible in my estimation. Brian would never get /Maddy into bed on the first date no matter what. but then again it was all her doing, so...who knows? LOL Good job on this flasher, Tom. Bob
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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Thank you. In today's world, anything can happen.
Comment from JudyE
This is a great entry for the flash fiction competition. Very well written. I can't suggest any improvements and I wish you all the best. It is bound to do well.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This is a great entry for the flash fiction competition. Very well written. I can't suggest any improvements and I wish you all the best. It is bound to do well.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from diamondbogle
Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Enjoyed your kind words, thank you.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Uh, wow, an eye for an eye... I would suggest that you pop back in there and put a warning for violence on this one - definitely rates one. A very evocative and dark offering ... best of luck in the contest! :) ;)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Uh, wow, an eye for an eye... I would suggest that you pop back in there and put a warning for violence on this one - definitely rates one. A very evocative and dark offering ... best of luck in the contest! :) ;)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thanks for the suggestion. I overlooked that one.
Comment from 24chas
Payback and karma can be tough, TPA. I think you captured that in this darkly humorous piece. At least, it was to me. I like the way you jumped right in to the story. Good job.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Payback and karma can be tough, TPA. I think you captured that in this darkly humorous piece. At least, it was to me. I like the way you jumped right in to the story. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Ben Colder
Never monkey with another man's monkey least you get bit. I never found anything wrong or mistakes to disqualify the write. Hope you do well. Best to you. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Never monkey with another man's monkey least you get bit. I never found anything wrong or mistakes to disqualify the write. Hope you do well. Best to you. Hope you win.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you.
