Seasons and Cycles
A Nonet Entry10 total reviews
Comment from LG Wolfe
Congratulations on your recent win, June. I'm new to the nonet format and haven't tried one myself but you have a lovely example with Seasons and Cycles. The circle down to the final word new, alone, as if to start another poem, is perfect. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Congratulations on your recent win, June. I'm new to the nonet format and haven't tried one myself but you have a lovely example with Seasons and Cycles. The circle down to the final word new, alone, as if to start another poem, is perfect. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2019
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Nonet about the season cycles that come and go each year just like we grow from year to year growing older and wiser and hopefully become a better person.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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A very well-written Nonet about the season cycles that come and go each year just like we grow from year to year growing older and wiser and hopefully become a better person.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2019
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I appreciate your positive and encouraging feedback.
Comment from Gloria ....
Very, very nice nonet, author. Your entire presentation is most artistic and the poem filled with rebirth of spring as compared to the joy of a grandchild's hug.
Really, well done. I wish you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Very, very nice nonet, author. Your entire presentation is most artistic and the poem filled with rebirth of spring as compared to the joy of a grandchild's hug.
Really, well done. I wish you much luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for dropping by and sharing your insights on my piece! Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from diamondbogle
Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Yo this was really cool. I like the way this was written. It had imagery but yet I kinda went off with it. I also liked how it flowed really nicely. Overall really well done.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for dropping by and sharing your insights on my piece!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, yeah, those old bones are never too chilled that those little arms cannot warm them...at least from the heart outward! :) ;) A beautiful nonet offering for the contest -- thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) :)
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Oh, yeah, those old bones are never too chilled that those little arms cannot warm them...at least from the heart outward! :) ;) A beautiful nonet offering for the contest -- thank you for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :) :)
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for dropping by and sharing your insights on my piece! Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read. It had a good flow to it and the imagery was well done. The form of the poem was perfect for the piece. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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This was a good read. It had a good flow to it and the imagery was well done. The form of the poem was perfect for the piece. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2019
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Thank you for dropping by and sharing your insights on my piece! Always nice to hear from you.
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Contest Author,
This is a very nicely written poem about the changing seasons. Your verse and visual presentation work well together. Thanks for shaaring and good luck. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Hi Contest Author,
This is a very nicely written poem about the changing seasons. Your verse and visual presentation work well together. Thanks for shaaring and good luck. Jan
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my nonet comparing the seasons to life's cycles.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a beautiful Nonet, comparing the cycle of human life to the cycle of nature and the seasons of the Earth. The syllable count is perfect, and I don't see a thing that could make it better than it already is. I wish you all the best in this contest!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This is a beautiful Nonet, comparing the cycle of human life to the cycle of nature and the seasons of the Earth. The syllable count is perfect, and I don't see a thing that could make it better than it already is. I wish you all the best in this contest!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my nonet comparing the seasons to life's cycles.
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I did!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful presentation of the evolution of a family, and you told a story here in so few words to keep the nonet syllable count, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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This is a beautiful presentation of the evolution of a family, and you told a story here in so few words to keep the nonet syllable count, I wish you luck with the contest, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my nonet comparing the seasons to life's cycles.
Comment from Marie Foster1
Very well written. The poem paints very clear mental pictures. The meaning is clear and there is no guessing required. I prefer this type of poetry. I like that it is about Spring one of my favorite seasons. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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Very well written. The poem paints very clear mental pictures. The meaning is clear and there is no guessing required. I prefer this type of poetry. I like that it is about Spring one of my favorite seasons. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019
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So glad you enjoyed my nonet comparing the seasons to life's cycles.
