Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Some dreams can be really weird and it is hard to know what to make of them. They can be frightening at the time. Thanks for sharing this with us. Have a great day. Judy

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Apr-2019

Thank you Very much for the review.

Comment from Randa Dayle

Excellent

Very nice free verse poetry..my Son in law is a kidney transplant recipient as well, and I do believe he hallucinated about a mannequin..you Never know! Good job!

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2019

Thank you for the review, that about your son in law, is interesting, the mind does mysterious things.

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi G.,

Wow! This is quite the dream. I am glad you were able to write about it. It is very well penned with nothing to revise here. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2019

Thank you for the review and Kind compliments.